Hello. ^^
Je suis en fac de droit, et on a un petit exercice à faire pour la

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Désolé, donc je recommence :

Hello. ^^
Je suis en fac de droit, et on a un petit exercice à faire pour la semaine prochaine en LV1 Anglais, sûrement ramassé. En fait on nous a donné un texte où un type se présente, et dedans il y a 20 erreurs d´anglais (grammaire, syntaxe, voc.), et perso j´arrive pas à dépasser la barre des 15/16. Peut-être pourriez-vous m´aider à toutes les trouver ? Merci d´avance. ^^

Voici le texte :
"My name is Luis Gonzalez and I come from Mexico. I born in 1951 in one small village outside Mexico City. When I was six years I went to the nursery school, and I enjoyed it very much. When I was eleven I´ve moved to Brazil, because my father is diplomat, so my all life I live in differents countries. After school, I was for four years in a business college, and I got a degree in business administration. I working for a company that products small calculator. It´s a good work, and I´m very interesting for computors. I want to learn english because my father and I will start our own business in America soon."

pourrait tu indiquer celle que tu a trouvé

Voici les fautes que j´ai trouvé pour le moment :

1) I born => I WAS born
2) one small village => A small village, nan ?
3) outside M.C => ché pas ça me parait louche ^^
4) I was 6 years => 6 years OLD
5) the nursery school => A nursery school
6) I´ve moved => I moved
7) my all life => all my life
8) I live in => I´ve been living in
9) differents countries => pas de "s" à different
10) I was for 4 years => ?! lol
11) I working => I´ve been working
12) small calculator calculatorS ?
13) it´s a good work => a good job, ou alors work se dit aussi ?
14) I´m very interesting => very INTERESTED
15) for computors => BY
16) computors => computErs
17) my father and I will start => will be strating ?

Merci d´avance pour votre aide.

Désolé, y a quelques fautes de frappe.

Personne n´a une petite idée.
Siouuuplaiiit.
En plus c´est ludique.

my father was diplomat pas is ^^

et aussi all my live i´ve lived in...

Mouais, mais ça m´avance pas trop...
Merci quand même. ^^

6) I´ve moved => I moved

pour moi c´est pas trop une faute, on peut dire I have moved, ou I moved ; du moins, il me semble...

Tout les forumeurs du topic de Yukutsu vont débarquer ici.
PgX Ouais, je sais pas, mais bon j´essaie de trouver des fautes. Le truc c´est pas ce qu´il faut mettre à la place, ça osef, mais faut juste trouver les endroits où y a des fôtes. :/

My name is Luis Gonzalez and I come from Mexico. I bornED in 1951 in A small village outside Mexico City. When I was six years I went to the nursery school, and I enjoyed it very much. When I was eleven I moved to Brazil, because my father WAS diplomat, so ALL MY life I liveD in differents countries. After school, I WENT for four years in a business college, and I got a degree in business administration. I workED for a company that products small calculator. It´s a good work, and I´m very interesting for computors. I want to learn english because my father and I will start our own business in America soon."

c´est tout ce que j´ai trouvé

My name is Luis Gonzalez and I come from Mexico. I *WAS* born in 1951 in *one*(a?) small village outside Mexico City. When I was six years *OLD* I went to the nursery school, and I enjoyed it very much. When I was eleven I*´ve* moved(I moved ? ) to Brazil, because my father is diplomat, so my *all*(Entire?) life *I live in differents countries*(A mettre au début avant so my entire life ?) . After school, I was for four years in a business college, and I got a degree in business administration. I working for a company that products small calculator. It´s a good work, and I´m very interesting for computors. I want to learn english because my father and I will start our own business in America soon."

J´ai pas fini, là,, mais y´en a quelques une avec des propositions de correction.

Ok, merci beaucoup à tous les trois, je vais étudier ça de suite.

a moin que le truc dans al compagnie soit du présent

dans ce cas c´est " i´m working "

Expliquons au cas par cas.
Pour l´âge il peut dire soit
When i was eleven
When i was eleven years old

Mais pas "When i was eleven years" tout court.

Oui Zac, ça on est d´accord.
Ca fait une faute. ^^

Pseudo Ben ouais, on sait pas trop...
C´est vicieux ce texte. :/

mais si c´est au passé c´est " i worked.. it was " ca fait 2 fautes de plus

Tout de même...
Il me semble que c´est au présent cette partie du texte.

Pour la suite je vois des fautes là.

After school, I was for four years (je verrais bien une faute là. >< ) in a business college, and I got a degree in business administration. I work*ing*(Worked or work, mais plutôt worked, sinon il y aurait un mot du genre "now") for a company that products small calculator. It´s a good work, and I´m very interest*ing*(ed) *for*(by) computors. I want to learn english because my father and I will start our own business in America soon."

Pis sûrement une dans la dernière phrase aussi.