Qui je dois suivre alors =S
Parce que je tiens vraiment à avoir une bonne note ( ça m´aiderait bien vu ma moyenne...)

apocalypse : notre prof elle a 26ans

¤Yutreza¤

De qui je dois prendre la traduction ? ??

g remanié le texte en faisant un mix des deux trad:

In this game, you are in the shoes of a 42-years man, who toke part into the Vietnamian Conflict, professionnal in that kind of job and decorated of the War Cross.

Your aim:
To slip silently in the russian warehouses of the headquarters and steal their new bomb drafts, before it could become a threat to our world. Armed with a FAMAS, wearing several iron rations, a good dagger and a complete suit of ifiltration in the forefront of the technology, you will take part to an elite six men crew, including you, every one chosen amongst the best, and expert in his own domain.

Ensuite prend la trad de roguszuka mais écrit commander et non commanding.
et aussi " martin trucmuche, able to destroy everything without anything" .

Merci beaucoup

¤Yutreza¤

Bon jvais corriger vite fait ce qui me saute aux yeux :

- " in the shoes of" : me semble trop familier
- " a 42-years man" => a 42 year old man
- " who toke part" => who took part
- " Vietnamian Conflict" => Vietnam conflict ou Vietnam Crisis.
- " professionnal in that kind of job" => lourd, calqué sur le français, à remanier.
- La structure " your aim : to . .." me semble moyenne. Y préférer " your aim is to . .."
- " To slip silently" : to slip signifie glisser au sens littéral. Se glisser furtivement = To sneak silently
- " wearing several iron rations, a good dagger and a complete suit" => to wear s´emploie pour porter des vêtements, pas des objets. Changer le verbe/structure.
- " you will take part to an elite six men crew" => Deux choses : you´ll be part of . .. et : " a six men elite crew".