Salut , j'ai une production oral pour demain , et j’aimerai que vous puissiez m'aider a corrigé quelques erreur que j'ai pu commettre notamment avec google traduction car il y avait des phrases que je savait pas dire .
Donc voila ce que je doit d'écrire :

Ma production :

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This Document is a cover of a book . The book's name "The New Yorker Dec.22&29,1997
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This document we a learn a lot . Indeed , I can see 2 peoples, a man and a girl . There are a christmas tree at the left of this cover with many gifts under the chridtmas tree , nevertheless there is one gifts who is open .In this gift there are books . On one of these books , I can read " Fiction Issue ". ON top of this cover , I read The New Yorker and a date dec.22&29, 1997 thus the price $3.50 .At the bottom of this cover , I can see a fireplace. So , as I was saying there 2 peoples a man and a girl . The girl Down the stairs with her hand to the ramp . This girl is very pretty but On the one hand , she have a gun on her second hand .the man it's lying on the floor .

3-To my mind ,I think the two pepoles were together .I suppose the girl wanted a big gift , for example a ring or a gold necklace but she didn't have she wanted .She set with this man to see what it wanted but the man

offered books and she kill him . Or the two peoples were competing and the girl kill him .On the other HAnd I suppose she kill him beacause he want hit or sex with her .

After , To my mind , she regrets his action and she escape the man's apartement . On the contrary she will denounce to the police .

The purpose of this document is We mustn't be fooled by appearances , A beauty can hide a monster .

4-To conclude I like this cover ,I want to read this book. Last but not least , We mustn't be fooled by appearances , an angel face can hide the Devil

Petit un, c'est un journal, pas un livre.

Petit deux, y'a tellement de fautes que j'ai la flemme de corriger.

J'ai cru voir que c'était un livre et au moins me corriger quelques fautes svp

J'ai eu le même sujet en classe de 4ème, que de souvenir...

Entendre la prof dire : "She is of the femme fatal kind".

La réaction de la prof quand j'ai dit que le mec était givré comme un sapin de Noël

Le mot sur le carnet...

Pareil, y'a 4 fautes par phrases, recommence tout avec un dictionnaire, pas google traduction.

Voilà, pas mal de faute. Attention notamment à 'people' qui est toujours au singulier

1-This document is the cover page of the newspaper "The New Yorker" (Dec. 22&29 1997)

2-We can deduce a lot from this document. Indeed, I can see 2 people, a man and a girl . There is a christmas tree on the left of this cover with many gifts at its feet, and there is one gift who is opened. In this gift there are many books. On one of these books, I can read " Fiction Issue ". On the top of this cover page, it is written "The New Yorker" and also the date: december 22nd & 29th 1997, and finally the price, which is $3.50. At the bottom, I can see a fireplace. So, as I was saying there are 2 people, a man and a girl. The girl is down the stairs with her left hand on the stair's rail. Although this girl is very pretty she's holding a gun on her second hand. The man is lying on the floor.

3-To my mind, I think these two pepole are a couple. I suppose the girl wanted a great gift, for example a ring or a gold necklace, but she didn't received what she excpected. She set with this man to see what it wanted but the man offered books and she kill him . Or they were fighting and the girl killed him. Futhermore, I suppose she killed him because he wanted to hit her or to rape her.

Plus, to my mind she regrets her action and she wants to escape the man's apartment. Or maybe on the contrary she will denounce herself to the police .

The purpose of this document is to advice us that we mustn't be fooled by appearances, a beauty can hide a monster.

4-To conclude, I like this cover, it makes me want to read it. At the last but not the least, we mustn't be fooled by appearances, the Devil can take the face of an angel.

Y'a peut être encore des fautes que je n'ai pas vues mais à cette heure

There is one gift who is opened.

Je me suis arrêté là

Ah oui en effet

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