Bonjour je voulais s'avoir si j'ai fait des fautes d'orthographes syntaxe .. Merci

1-This document is a cartoon . it speak about the honesty on the internet .

2-This cartoon is in two part . In left , i can see a old lady . She smokes and she is in underwear .
The lady is ugly , she has wrinkled skin , she has hair in firecracker , a longue nose . She is plump moreover she has a bunny slippers . She is really ugly .Her bedroom is clean . She is on her computer .

In right I can see man and he is also ugly . He is hairless and he is big , very big . He is hairy besides he is dressed by a T-shirt so short whith his big belly falling . His bedrom is really unclean .
In his bedroom there are lot of food .

The two people have a discussion through internet . The old lady pretent , she is a model and the man believes . The man pretend is a chippendale and race speed boat whereas he is big and lazy .
They pretend are perfect .

Le "s" à la troisième personne du singulier.

It speaks

Le "s" du pluriel

"two parts"

La majuscule au "i"
I can

utilise plutôt "she is in panties" au lieu de "she is in underwear"

"she has her hair in firecracker"

"At right"

"he wears a T-shirt "

"His bedrom is really dirty"

"The two people are talking on the internet"

"The old lady claims"

The man claims he is a chippendale"

"and race speed boat whereas he is big and lazy ."
ça ne veut rien dire
"They claims they are perfect"

Après les phrases sont d'un niveau plus que basique.... Mais bon c'est ton anglais

On peut pas dire d'un document qu'il speak, en anglais.
Faudrait plutôt dire "it deals with" (il traite de)

Deals with, bears upon, about

Merci pour vos réponses j'ai corrigés tout ça . Je l'ai continuer , es que ça va ?

3-The goal of this document is to make theme aware of the drawbacks internet because there are lot of fake account .There are more and more fake account and it's very dangerous . we must be very carful .

Before I supposes they searched love therefore The two peoples in this document are create a account on a dating site and They lie about their personality.

After I suppose the two peoples will meet and they will see that it is trapped themselves .

Lien du document que je d'écrit:

The goal of this document is to raise awareness of Internet disadvantages because there are many fake accounts

accounts

careful

Before, I supposed that they searched love. First, the two people created their own account on a dating site. They gave a lot of informations about their personality. They lied, because they thought it would be easier to fall in love.

They chat a long time before the real meeting. They realize that they have lied . They are caught in their own trap

+ sur ton premier texte il y a d'autres fautes que j'ai eu la flemme de corriger...

On the left , I can see an old lady

On the right, I can see a man

En anglais on a plus tendance à dire "bald" que "hairless".
"His room is very messy" est courant en anglais donc mieux à utiliser
De plus, c'est "There are a lot of food", "The man believes it" et "pretend to be" et non "pretend he is" même si ça peut se dire mais c'est bizarre.

Pour le reste les autres ont très bien corrigé

Merci beaucoup pour toute vos réponses

Voila ma conclusion
To conclude , i like this cartoon because I find it funny , humorous and realistic .
I agree with the cartoonist beacause it's the reality .
There are more and more fake account and it's very dangerous . Lot of people are falling into the trap. we must be very carful . Do not talk to people we do not know

Au lieu de dire "the goal"
Remplace par "the purpose"