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Topic Rédaction d'un article en Anglais

Sujet : Rédaction d'un article en Anglais

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alexandre-ts
alexandre-ts
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08 février 2020 à 17:23:36

Bonjour, étant en terminal je dois rédiger un article journalistique en anglais, si quelqu'un aurait la gentillesse de me lire et de me d'indiquer les éventuelles fautes de grammaire ça serait cool. Merci d'avance !

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In the United State of America, the number of vegans has increased 160 per cent over the past 10 years.

The increase in meat consumption spark a controversy. It could be not ideal for the human digestive system. According to the U.S Department of Agriculture, eating meat is « a significant cause of food illness » and «  food poisoning sickens more than 48 million people ». The worst that could happen for the meat consumption is to generate heart disease in humans (according to the Peta publication posted on November 18th 2019) or kill them, more than 3,000 people are killed this year

However, veganism, plant based could affect the human health, especially the cognitive functions. The experts reveal that vegan diet can raise the risk of Alzheimer’s illnesses because people are not getting the crucial fats they need.
Besides, the impact is not only about health, but also environmental, because it could decrease automatically « an individual’s carbon footprint from food by up to 73 per cent. » (Joseph Poore, Researchers at the University of Oxford). This new lifestyle not only serves to decrease the gas emission, but also land use and water use.
On the contrary, that vegan lifestyle is not shared by many Mexican farmers. They supply « around 45 per cent of the world’s avocados »(Idefonso Guajardo, the country’s economy secretary). Due to an international increase of the avocados demand , they are also forced to import their own avocados consumption.

Nowadays, it is not easy to ignore the environmental and ressources impact of the meat consumption. But, a part of the population is still out on how going veganism affects your brain. There are not enough evidence to determine if it is helpful for the brain at every level. "

RSAAH
RSAAH
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01 mai 2020 à 20:30:56

Tu as confondu le forum "Commandos : Le sens du devoir" avec le forum "Devoirs" ? :rire:

Message édité le 01 mai 2020 à 20:31:15 par RSAAH
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