Forlorn Hope
Feeling:
Really “I’ve-heard-this.before” song!!! Although I personaly liked the piano intro, I know it’s not outstanding at all... I didn’t feel much with this song...
0.5/1.5
Instruments Development:
The elec piano at the intro is annoying, an acoustic grand piano would sound much better (midi sucks btw)... About the guitar, I’ll just say I don’t liked the “tune 2 down steps” (in this song), it doesn’t fit well... Drums were nice, except in the 1st bridge... and didn’t like the constant bass drum through all the song.
0.5/1
The Song:
Not a bad song, but also not the “first” not-bad-song... (if you understand what I mean)... Would give this song a 3/4 star rating if this wasn’t a comp...
1/2
Length:
Appropiate...
0.5/0.5
Rating: 2.5
Forlorn Hope
Intro has some special used parts by other songs in a million ballads but finally I realized that I liked the intro, as same as outro.
Intro II you could have composed kind of more bendings or harmonize better both guitars at the same time, ok when I ve entered to the bridge I said to me nooooo, it sounds really unpleasant, too fast without a really hook to have made a fast part in that bars…
Now the next part was the best bars of the song, the verses, really nice palm notes, but I didn’t got the difference between verse and prechorus it lacks of a real hook as same as intro II and bridge.
Interlude has the same notes as the rest of the song but has’nt anything special. And the rest of the song is the same as the begining only repetitive bars.
Ok in my personal opinion I really enyoyed your song this has a bunch of really good parts, maybe you’ll not win the comp but your simple song is very special. Keep on workin and improving.
Creativity: 2/5
Interestingness: 3.5/5
Feeling: 4/5
Mood: 3/5
Development: 2.5/5
Total: 3.0
Bon bin j´crois que j´vais abandonner l´idée d´être dans les 10 premiers! =P