Anakin > Ça va, je trouve que c'est plutôt bien écrit. Il y a quelques fautes d'orthographe que j'ai corrigé et j'ai aussi remplacé quelques mots par des synonymes et syntaxé différemment la première phrase.
Bon après, je n'assure pas que j'ai fais comme il faut parce que j'ai pas un niveau d'étudiant en anglais non plus, mais ça me semble bon ainsi. Il vaut mieux le faire passer à un autre jugement. ^^
Et Dead Poets Society rox
Firstly, I think that parents shouldn't interfere in their children's choice concerning their future lives. Indeed, the youngsters should be able to choose their future direction because they can learn thanks to their mistakes. Moreover, a child needs freedom to bloom because he must be able to live good and bad experiences to acquire of the maturity. Otherwise , later, they will become irresponsible adults !
In addition, parents think according to their feelings and not following those of children. For example, my sister would not study in England if my mother had interfered in her choice.
Indeed, my mother is sad because my sister lives far away.
Nevertheless, I consider that parents should interfere in their children's choice when this ones want to do something dangerous.
So finally, I conclude that parents shouldn't interfere in their children's choice unless it's dangerous. For example in " Dead poets Society " , the play is not dangerous so Mr Perry shouldn't interfere in the choice of Neil.