Là, les fautes son corrigées. 
Je vais te montrer ce que j'aurais fait à ta place :
"Long time ago, the first pokemon was created. He was named Arceus. Later, he laid three eggs...and disappeared, his mission accomplished.
Thus, the eggs felt from three different places :
One in the water, another in the fire, and the last in the distorion world...
Many years later, the three eggs hacthed.
From water appeared Kyogre, from fire went out Groudon and in the darkness was hidden Giratina.
Thanks for watching.
Please Stars. "
A toi de juger sur tes préférences d'anglais.