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LONDRES
London is the capital of Great Britain. It is one of the greatest cities in the world. It is an important business and financial centre. It is an intellectual centre, too. Everywhere in London, there are open spaces: Hyde Park and Regent Park are the largest one. The City is the oldest part of London. It stretches from Fleet Street to the Tower on the North Bank of the Thames. It is the main business centre of Britain. The West End lies between Fleet Street and Hyde Park. It is a residential district.
It contains the most expensive hotels and restaurants. We find the most fashionable shops there. There are many place of interest such as Big Ben in the clock Tower, Buckingham palace, the principal London Residence of the Queen, museums, galleries and the University of London.
The East End includes large industrial areas and the port of London. It is the second largest port in the world. The most famous historic building in London is the Tower of London. There are still traces of the Roman wall. The principal attraction is the crown jewels. The most important gallery in London is The National Gallery. It contains a rich collection of famous painting.
One of the greatest libraries in the world is the British Museum. It contains rare books and fabulous collections, old drawing, prints...There are Egyptian, Greek and Roman antiquities. Finally if you want to know the time or the way to the station, ask a bobby or the London bobby. You will never forget his humour and patient. Bobbies are the friendliest policeman in the world.
London have a Westminster Abbey, it's the tallest Gothic building in Great Britain, this medieval church has been holding religious services for a thousand years, including important events of the British Royal family such as coronations, weddings and funerals. She have also the London Eye has become one of the icons of London as well as being the tallest observation wheel in the world. Relax in the comfort and design of its capsules for an unforgettable journey.
The city of London is used for filming movies and TV series such as Sherlock, Spider man, Harry potter, Trust and others. This one is often use for the beauty and diversity of the city.
London is a very touristy town especially for its carnivals and festivals. Indeed, it welcomes thousands of people and especially for the anniversary of the birth William Shakespeare in Great Britain but also the Spitalfields Music Summer Festival, the « Summer Exhibition » à la Royal Academy of Arts or East End Film Festival.
I chose London because I love this city and his monuments. I have been to London once and hope to return soon. I have always been fascinated by London and I wish I will live there later.
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