Bonjour
Je vous demande votre aide concernant un dialogue de livre(Witness pour les intéressés) que je dois modifier pour en faire un script de film. Voilà ce que ça donne, est-ce qu'il reste des erreurs? Merci
Ps: J'ai rajouté les indications scéniques en français mais n'en tenez pas compte à part pour mieux comprendre le sens du texte + ils sont au téléphone.

(D'un ton énervé) Are you telling me, it's impossible to locate this woman ? We are talking about 20th century law enforcement.

Yes I know, but there is a big problem the Amish don't live in it. They don't think in it !

(Toujours d'un ton énervé)That's interesting, Sheriff but I don't care ! This case is very important, it deals with the murder of a police officer. (D'un ton plus calme)So, you know there must be a directory of these people somewhere ?

Of course.The Tax rolls. Voter registration. However, I don't have enough manpower to send a deputy out to every family name Lapp in Lancaster County to see if they have your Rachel.

Maybe, Sheriff, you could do some telephoning ?

(D'un ton amusé) Yeah, yeah. But there is a little bit problem, The Amish don't have telephones. I wouldn't know who I have to call.

Shit, I have forgotten that they don't use telephones. I remember reading something about it. So what can we do ?

Perhaps, I might get something on local radio and television for you. Like you know, alert the public ?

(D'un ton plus rassuré) Yeah. Good idea !

(Se foutant de la "gueule" de l'autre) But they don't use radios or televisions too...

(Silence puis dit) Thank you Sheriff, Good bye.
(Après avoir raccroché) How incompetent he is!