Salutation.

J'ai un devoir à faire pour lundi qui consiste à écrire une lettre à sa famille pour leurs parlés d'une fusillade qui a eu lieu au sein de mon établissement.

J'aimerais savoir s'il y'aurait des fautes dans mon pavé.

" Today is not a day as the others. Indeed, a shooting arose within my university to San Angelo today, in Texas. This shooting in taken place this morning at about 8 am.
At this moment there, Me was with my friends Aaron just in front of the door of entered by the establishment when suddenly, before of entry, we heard several shot.
At this moment unexpected, we said to ourselves at once that he had there well a shooting which was occurring.
At the moment, we paniced and adds us to us distant from the establishment and since the security arrives on the spot.
According to the press, there were 5 deaths and 3 wounded persons.
For summary, this shooting horrified, terrified me and will for ever remain to engrave in my head. "

Merci d'avance.