Bonjour

Est ce que quelqu'un pourrais me corriger mon Anglais

The narrator had resentment because she doesn’t want to left Fulham. Her Father is quiet, who speak only when needed, he is selfish.
The narrator miss most her friends.The narrator did go on commuting to Fulham for six years because she would spend several hours each day commuting to grammar school in Fulham, clubs in Soho and finally architectural college in Bloomsbury.
She didn’t like the bored, the dull of the city, It does not have the same vision as Fulham than Perivale (She did not find what she loved it at Fulham)
I Think She left Perivale for good because she wants to See her friends, review the landscape.
They are advantages for the rich family because they didn’t have problem of money. Baby boomers are choosing to live in the suburbs to raise their children and enjoy the green spaces.

The narrator had resentments because she doesn’t want to left Fulham. Her Father is quiet, he speaks only when needed, and he is selfish.
The narrator miss most her friends.The narrator went on commuting to Fulham for six years because she would spend several hours each day commuting to grammar school in Fulham, clubs in Soho and finally architectural college in Bloomsbury.
She didn’t like the bored, the dull of the city. Fulham isn't the same as Perivale (She did not find what she loved at Fulham)
I Think she left Perivale forever, because she wants to see again the landscape and her friends.
There are advantages for the rich family because they didn’t have problem of money. Baby boomers chose to live in the suburbs to raise their children and enjoy the green spaces.

Par contre j'ai pas compris ton truc 'on commuting' et 'commuting grammar'

Et à la troisième ligne c'est "Most of her friends miss her"

Les temps je sais pas si c'est du passé ou du présent qu'il a voulu mettre parce que sur un certain autre topic y'avait plus le même sens
Et pour le reste la flemme

Du present j'crois

D'autres personnes pour me corriger ?