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Mon travail :

This document is an advertisement for Peta to fight against cruelties of animals.

In this photo, on the right, we can ee a strong man bare who is crossing his arms. This man has got tatoos on his body and he is wearing a cap and a black trouser. Besides, there is a moto Honda behind the man. At the top, we can see a quotation who is "Ink, not mink" thus a big tatoo. At the bottom the peta's sloggan.

This photo represets a way to fight against cruelties of animals. The man shows that you can be confortable in your own skin and nit with the animals' fur.

Proposez moi des améliorations, vos propositions de descriptions. Merci.

cruelties done to animals* et non of animals sur ton avant dernière ligne.

Ta description me semble complète mais tu devrais pas parler des couleurs, parler un peu de l'asso PETA ? Ainsi que d'expliquer un peu plus profondément la petite phrase en bas à droite ? Parler brièvement de qui est le mec, étant donné que sa citation est donnée avec son nom ?