Voilà pour le CNED j'ai 2 écrits, et j'aimerais vous les faire soumettre et que vous me donniez votre avis. 
Le premier porte sur un mec qui est en Angleterre, et voit une annonce pour louer une voiture là-bas...
"Sir,
I’m actually in England, and I want to have some information about your service. I have read your advertisement, and I am interested by them.
Firstly I would like to know information about the car: what type of car do you propose to yours clients? Are they old or recent? I want to be sure you offer the best quality as possible… And how works the insurance? I’ve no idea about that…
Secondly I have to admit to you that I don’t much money, I’m poor (it’s the crisis you know, and I’ve lost my job two weeks ago). So could you tell me what the price is for one week in August? For two weeks too ? And for me what is the rental period? I want to know, it’s very important for me!
Thirdly I have several questions about the practice. I imagine we can’t drive one thousand mile with your car… So what maximum mileage we can do? I’ve to precise to you I want to discover all the country, so it’s an important factor for me. Do you know too how person can contain the car? I’m travelling with one friend, three sisters, my little cat, and with my grandfather, so I expect you have a minivan or something like that…
I hope you receive my message and if it is possible I want to reply rapidly!
Thanks to you,
Raymond."
Le second porte sur quelqu'un qui écrit une lettre à un pote, et qui lui parle de son job, et sur question de son pote il doit lui raconter comment était son 1er boulot...
"Hi David!
I’m glad for you if you feel good. For me it’s a little more complicated: in fact I’ve lost my job recently and I’ve a lot of difficulties for find a new one… In France we haven’t many jobs (it’s the crisis). So I’m register at “Pole Emploi”, and I wait a possibility. Sincerely I want to leave France, I’m here since I am a little boy, and now I want to discover something different. Let me tell you a secret: I don’t like very much our new president. So I’m convinced to live in another country… and Australia is a perfect opportunity for me. Do you accept if I’m coming work with you? You know I’m an excellent writer, so I could help you if you want!
I’ve read your questionnaire, and obviously I want to reply it! So this is my experience: my first job was in McDonald, when I was 20 (the good time…). It was very difficult for me because I hate receive orders by someone (for these reason I stayed five weeks at work then my boss dismisses me). The first day, it was in autumn, and it rained a lot! You know in north of France it’s all day like that. So I began at 11 am, and I prepared sandwiches, until three pm. It was very funny I remembered, because you know it’s an easy job. When you know how to do this, it isn’t difficult… I wasn’t stressed or anxious, I was even excited, I loved cook, and so for me it was an opportunity to show my talent! The same day I worked too between 7 pm and midnight. During six days of the week, I worked like that. I’ve met my girlfriend here (she was checker), and with other colleagues we had a good relation. But as I said before not with my job. I hated him. He was a small old man, and he always screamed… One day I told him what I was thinking, he didn’t appreciate, so I had lost my job…
So it was my history! I hope you liked it for you article!
Take care,
Hervé."
Voilà si vous pouvez m'aider s'il y a des erreurs, merci à vous !
