Bonjour j'aurais besoin d'une petite correction.
Je voudrais juste savoir si ce que j'ai écrit est correct niveau grammaire anglaise.
Merci de votre aide

At first time I didn't know you
Over time I learned to know you
We liked to find us
we liked conversed about us

You've become important to me
You started to be there for me
You can't know how much it matters to me

<Refrain>
Why I loved you ?
Why I hated you ?
Why I can't detach myself from you ?
Why I need you ?
</Refrain>

And it's happened
I know I shouldn't have
But I didn't know what I wanted
Unfortunately for me it didn't work
Unfortunately for you it wouldn't work

Love turning into hate
Passion turning into pain
I got screwed again

<Refrain>
Why I loved you?
Why I hated you?
Why I can not detach myself from you ?
Why I need you?
</Refrain>

I don't know what I think of you
I don't know what I should think of you
And yet, I keep you around me
And I need you to stay alive

Pas trop de problèmes je pense sauf le it's happened, c'est it happened. Par contre, l'usage du present perfect (you've become) qui relate un fait en rapport avec le présent, et le preterit (why I loved) semble bizarre, parce que ce I loved signifie un état qui n'est plus valable pour le présent actuel, tandis que le you've become signifie que ça fonctionne toujours.

Or, ça coince entre qqun qui est devenu important (et qui est tjrs valable actuellement avec le you've become) alors qu'on ne l'aime plus dans le temps présent (loved)