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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement ? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer .
(200-250 words)

We make many decisions in our lifetime, whether it is a big decision or not.
In every instance, the choices we make could affect our future in different ways.
According to me, this is why one should never make a choice alone.

First of all, our choices may have impact on people close to us.
As an example, when you decide to cut short to a relationship, you may affect not only your ex-sweetheart, but also several mutual friends. A lot of people are involved in your social choices. Thus, you may need an outside point of a view, and tell somebody about your problems. Maybe it will not change your choice, but you really have to receive advice from another person.
Moreover, if your resign from your job, it is equally affecting your family or friend circle. You might be unable to feed your child!

As a deduction of this argument, we can argue that it is very important to talk about your decisions with somebody who has an outside point of view.
Indeed, you may be totally wrong in your thinking, and an argument could reveal that.

Furthermore, you should apply the scientists’ method: they never make an important decision alone, owing to the risk of a huge mistake.

However, sometimes, while you are alone, you have to make a decision. You should think about it twice!

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LAAAAAAAAME.
First things first, this doesn't look like it amounts to .2k words, like not even close, so yeah u def need more.
I don't know what kinda class asks u to do this type of shit, but if last time I did one of those, my method behind it was to always have the 2 povs outlined clearly. That is to say that u only cover 1 side of the argument here, saying that "yeah a person should always try to get advice from others when making a decision, if at all possible". While I mostly agree with that, if I had to give an example as to when you shouldn't, I guess I'd say "when comes the time of whatever type of elections ur country holds, if you do decide to ask ur friends or family about it, much like any human being, they'll just lay out a whole bunch of facts to convince you to vote for either side, meaning it won't be much of any advice, more like forcing their ideals on you to "help" you make up your mind. If you think about it that way, don't u think it's best to get information on ur own and decide who to vote for without asking anyone.
Anyways, I'm sure you could find a different example than this for ur essay, or you could even take mine if you like, I don't give a damn. At least know that a good essay never covers only 1 side of the spectrum.
That being said, I can't say I like what u wrote in ur first part. It sounds really cheesy and inconsequential.
Like when you say "it is equally affecting your family or friend circle. You might be unable to feed your child!". This much couldn't be more obvious, but to me it feels irrelevant considering only a complete degenerate wouldn't consider the fact that losing a job would mean a lower income. I won't say it's bad to put it in there, but it really just sounds stupid to me, the way it feels like when a student tries to fill in the remaining words with useless crap.
And that's it for me
Good luck man

Le 08 octobre 2018 à 20:07:01 [Axmaxati] a écrit :
LAAAAAAAAME.
First things first, this doesn't look like it amounts to .2k words, like not even close, so yeah u def need more.
I don't know what kinda class asks u to do this type of shit, but if last time I did one of those, my method behind it was to always have the 2 povs outlined clearly. That is to say that u only cover 1 side of the argument here, saying that "yeah a person should always try to get advice from others when making a decision, if at all possible". While I mostly agree with that, if I had to give an example as to when you shouldn't, I guess I'd say "when comes the time of whatever type of elections ur country holds, if you do decide to ask ur friends or family about it, much like any human being, they'll just lay out a whole bunch of facts to convince you to vote for either side, meaning it won't be much of any advice, more like forcing their ideals on you to "help" you make up your mind. If you think about it that way, don't u think it's best to get information on ur own and decide who to vote for without asking anyone.
Anyways, I'm sure you could find a different example than this for ur essay, or you could even take mine if you like, I don't give a damn. At least know that a good essay never covers only 1 side of the spectrum.
That being said, I can't say I like what u wrote in ur first part. It sounds really cheesy and inconsequential.
Like when you say "it is equally affecting your family or friend circle. You might be unable to feed your child!". This much couldn't be more obvious, but to me it feels irrelevant considering only a complete degenerate wouldn't consider the fact that losing a job would mean a lower income. I won't say it's bad to put it in there, but it really just sounds stupid to me, the way it feels like when a student tries to fill in the remaining words with useless crap.
And that's it for me
Good luck man

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