Bonsoirs d'abourds =)

In the midle of the night Heatcliff heard a noise from the library , he went to see in the library and he saw a book on the soil .
The book was opened on the page 1520 . It was the date of the death of Catherine . He heard somebody to sob ... It is while he saw Catherine !
She wore a black jacket and she had a knife and some blood in hands ! Shiveringly she says :

H I will to kill you ... H I will to kill you ! H I will to kill you !!!!

In a Frenzy H yelled : Why me ? Why me ?

Because I love you , but I Hate You too !!! (109)

She put the knife in the H's Stomach ! H feel on the soil , He lost lot blood ( , and he died ... (128)

Catherine muttered : I succeded in taking revenge , and now we are joined by death ...

Catherine went back to the world of death !

Merci de me dire les fautes que j'ai =)

J'ai corrigé quelques trucs !

In the midle of the night, Heatcliff heard a noise ( coming ) from the library. Therefore, He went there, and saw a book on the soil .
The book was opened on page 1520 . It was the date ofCatherine's death .
Then, He heard somebody sobbing ... It was Catherine !
She was wearing a black jacket, having a knife and some blood on her hands ! Shiveringly she said :

H I want to kill you ... H I want to kill you ! H I want to kill you !!!!

But then, H yelled in a frenzy : Why me ? Why me ?

(I want to kill you ) because I love and Hate You !!! (109)

She put then the knife in H's Stomach ! H fell on the soil , He lost lots of blood ( , and then, he died ) ... (128)

Catherine muttered : I succeded in taking revenge , and now we are joined by death ...

After this, Catherine went back to "the world of death"

Merci l'ami :p sinon tu la trouve comment ? on doit inventer la suite de l'histoire : H entends un bruit et inventer la suite mdr

Ouais c'est bien sympa, developpe un peu plus l'histoire et ce sera top!
"It was the date ofCatherine's death ." => " It was catherine's death date " j'ai oublié de corriger ça

Tu peux utiliser stab pour poignarder ce sera plus correct:
"She stabbed H in the stomach."
-Ing pour un verbe te permettrait d'éviter de faire deux phrases :
"H fell on the soil, losing lots of blood."
Je ne suis pas sur que joined in death veuille dire quelque chose, peut être vaut-il mieux utiliser linked/bound by death
Et juste pour un effet de style plutot que World of death, the "underworld"

Je comprend pas pourquoi vous utilisez "soil"
Ca veut dire "sol", mais dans le sens... géologique du terme.
Ici le sol se traduit plutôt par "ground", ou "floor" (si c'est en intérieur).

Merci de votre aide =)

Le premier paragraphe c'est toi qui l'a écrit ou c'est le sujet ?
Auquel cas, si le prof a utilisé soil, autant continuer avec sinon je suis d'accord avec Pezz

Tout est de moi