à tous

Voilà j'ai une conversation fictive entre 2 personnages à faire et donc j'aurai besoin de votre " savoir " pour me corriger la 1ère personne : un correspondant qui se présente à un autre mec

Hi,
My name is peter, I'm your new penfriend.
Let me introduce myself. I'm just 17.
I leave in a little village near paris about 320kms.
I'm fond of nascar and criket.
I often play tennis. Moreover i'de like to become a medecin or something like that. I really want to success. I've got a lot of ambition.
I don't know what i can add ?
Maybe about my family , i've got 3 brothers.
Nowaday i'm just a student and from monday to saturday i must to go to the college it's not already pleasant... and often boring.
At the end of year i'll have a very important exam and i must to pass it. At school my favourite subjects are history and economics .
I enjoye my life !
I really expecte your answer

All the best

Bon , ca fait bien gamin mais bon je suis obligé de le faire ^^ donc si vous pouvez m'aider un peu

bonne soirée