Je dois faire un devoir de 300mots qui répond à ce sujet:
Would you be ready to go and work in a different environment than the one you grew up in ?

J'ai compris vite fait ce qu'il fallait faire 2 paragraphes, 1 ou je dis que c'est bien(je donne les avantages) et 1 autre ou je dis que c'est pas marrant, etc
Et enfin une conclusion ou je dis si je suis pret à partir ou pas.

J'aimerais que vous m'aidiez à corriger les fautes et que vous me donniez des arguments pour les 2 catégories parce que je suis loin des 300mots. merci

J'ai fais ca:
It can be a hard thing to leave my city and go in a different environnement. If I do that, i will lose all my friends. I will become confused because I don't know this place, this environment and this people. I will need time to adapt myself to this new life. Firstly, I would certainly be alone because I will know nobody.

However, it can also be a good thing to change my environment. In this new place, I will discover new landscapes and meet new people. I could also have new friends. I would have to restart completely my life. Perhaps this new life will be better. I like the idea of learning new things and see how other people live. I will need to find a job and a flat.

Chaud ca me rappelle les rédac d anglais en controle...
J'avais jamais d arguments

philiiiiiiiippe -> si t'as pas d'idée tu pourrais m'aider à corriger les fautes ?
j'approche les 200mots mais il me manque encore pas mal de trucs:

It can be a hard thing to leave my city and go in a different environnement. If I do that, I will lose all my friends. I will become confused because I don't know this place. For me, this environment will be new and this people will be like strangers. I will need time to adapt myself to this new life. Firstly, I would certainly be alone because I will know nobody.

However, it can also be a good thing to change my environment. In this new place, I will discover new landscapes and meet new people. I could also have new friends. I would have to restart completely my life. Perhaps this new life will be better. I like the idea of learning new things and see how other people live. I will need to find a job and a flat.

In conclusion, I think it is a difficult choice to do. If it is possible, I prefer staying in my current environment. There are many advantages but too inconveniences. By moving, I could learn a lot of things but I would lose my friends, my job and my home.

It would be hard a thing to leave my city and go to a different environment. Should I do so, I would lose all of my friends. I would get confused because I would not know the new place I would be living in. For me, this environment would be new and the people there would be strangers. I would need some time to get used to this new life. Firstly (pourquoi firstly ?) I would certainly be all alone since I would not know anybody.

However, it could also be good a thing to change of environment. In that new place I would discover new landscapes and meet new people. I could also make new friends. I would have to start over my life. This new life may even be better than my previous life. I like the idea of learning new things and seeing how different people from me live. I would need to find a job and an appartment.

Finally, it is hard a choice to make. If it is possible, I would prefer to stay in my current environment. Ther are many advantages but too many drawbacks. By moving to a new place, I would learn lots of things as well as I would lose my friends, my job, and my home.

En espérant que ca t'aide.

P.S tiens moi au courant

Merci, vraiment merci je vais regarder ca. Vraiment sympa !!!

Dis moi ta note après

Je vous la donnerez mais y a pas que l'orthographe et la syntaxe qui compte, le texte traite bien le sujet ?

Plutot bien oui. Après j'ai pas compté les mots, ca correspond ?
En tout cas je t'ai mis quelques formules littéraires etc si t'as pas pour habitude de faire ca ton prof sera surpris en bien.
T'es en quelle classe et quelle section (pour savoir si c'est ce qui est attendu)
Je pars dans 5 minutes, je te répondrai ptetre dtaleur.

Je suis en 1ere S. Enfin sinon y a pas de problemes je connais ce type de formules mais j'y pense jamais.
Merci pour l'aide!!

En effet, c'est d'un niveau supérieur à ce qu'on te demande en 1ère S lol ^^