Voilà en fait j'ai un exposé à faire devant ma classe,et si quelque aurait la gentillesse de me corriger quelques fautes sa serait sympa
Les mots entres parenthèses sont les mots à traduire en anglais

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I am going to talk about South Park

My favourite television serie is South Park because it's funny.South Park was create by Trey Parker and Matt Stone in nineteen ninetee two and the serie (a été) diffused in nineteen ninetee seven.The serie speak the life of 4 boys of eight years badly brought up living in the little city,name is South Park.,Eric Cartman,Kyle Broflovski,Stan Marsh and Kenny Mc Cormick.Eric Cartman is a very nasty,he's fat and everybody hates him.Kyle is redhead and (juif) .Stan Marsh is a normal boy and he's Kyle best friend.Finally , Kenny is (pauvre),he always have got his orange parka on him,he dies in all the episodes and he's my favorite figure.All figures of the television serie are in paper in the first episode,after,the next episodes were create of computer.Now,South Park (compte)twelve seasons and there is fifteen of the envisaging.South Park is diffuse on the channel TV Game One.

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Merci d'avance

I am going to talk about South Park

My favourite television serie is South Park because it's funny.South Park was create by Trey Parker and Matt Stone in nineteen ninetee two and this serie was diffused in nineteen ninetee seven.The serie deals with the life of 4 boys of eight years badly brought up living in the little cit named South Park. Eric Cartman, Kyle Broflovski, Stan Marsh and Kenny Mc Cormick are the main characters.Eric Cartman is very nasty, he's fat and everybody hates him. Kyle is redhead and jewel. Stan Marsh is a normal boy (?) and he's the Kyle best friend. Finally, Kenny is poor, he always have his orange parka on him, he dies in all episodes and he's my favorite character. All figures (characters plutôt ?) of this television serie are in paper in the first episode, later, the next episodes were created by computer. Now, South Park counted among twelve seasons and fifteen are contemplate. In France, South Park is diffused on TV Game One.

city*
4 eight year-old boys*
fifteen are contemplated*

created
ninety
counted ? (c'est pas counts ?)

j'ai lu en diagonale j'ai vu plein des fautes
les plus grosses :
series toujours avec un s à la fin
jewel c'est un joyau je suppose que tu voulais dire juif donc Jewish
he's Kyle's best friend
he always wears
favourite*
on the French channel game one

I am going to talk you about South Park.
South Park is my favorite TV show because it's really funny. South Park was created by Trey Parker and Matt Stone in 1992 and is broadcasted since 1997. This show deals with the life of four badly brought up eight years boys living in a little town called South Park whose names are Eric Cartman,Kyle Broflovski,Stan Marsh and Kenny Mc Cormick [j'avoue la phrase est un peu longue mais bon]. Eric Cartman is nasty, fat and everybody hates him. Kyle is redhead and jewish. Stan Marsh is a normal boy and Kyle's best friend. At last, Kenny is poor, he always wears an orange parka and dies in every episodes, he's my favorite character. [figure c'est un chiffre]. All the characters were made with paper in the first episode, next episodes were created by computer afterwards. [quelqu'un peut me confirmer pour le by?]. There are 12 seasons of South Park for now and 15 planned. People can watch the show on the TV Channel Game One.

Voilà je pense que ça sera mieux, c'est dur à corriger autrement.
Garde ce que tu veux de ce que j'ai fait et pour le vocabulaire, tu peux utiliser ce site http://www.wordreference.com/fr/ qui est très utile.

Vaut peut-être mieux enlever le premier you après réflexion

eight years old*

eight-year-old* je dirais même ! =)

Ok merci beaucoup,l'orthographe à pas trop d'importance étant donné que je fais sa à l'oral

I am going to talk about South Park.
South Park is my favorite TV show because it's really funny. South Park was created by Trey Parker and Matt Stone in 1992 and has been broadcasted since 1997. This show deals with the life of four badly brought up eight-year-old boys living in a little town called South Park whose names are Eric Cartman,Kyle Broflovski,Stan Marsh and Kenny Mc Cormick. Eric Cartman is nasty, fat and everybody hates him. Kyle is red-haired and jewish. Stan Marsh is a normal boy and Kyle's best friend. At last, Kenny is poor, he always wears an orange parka and dies in every episode, he's by far my favorite character. All characters were made with paper in the first episode, and the following episodes were created by computer. There are 12 seasons of South Park until now and 15 are planned. The show can be watched on the TV Channel Game One.

Ouais je savais plus pour has been broadcasted, guess you're right.

Jewish = hébreux

Jew = juif .

a jew = un juif
jewish = juif/juive (adjectif)
hebrew = hébreux (j'imagine)