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[Anglais] Correction expression

Attirance
Attirance
Niveau 3
01 juin 2008 à 14:55:50

Une petite expression qu'on a à rendre. J'aimerais savoir s'il y a des fautes, merci.

Hello Steve,
I think you know why I'm writing you. I don't want you to worry needlessly... I call your attention to the fact that your dirty woman and your brat are well-fed and are comfortably housed, at the moment. I only want that you to suffer what I suffered. I remind you of facts : in July 3rd, 1990, death of Stan Kins, executed on the electric chair. Yes, I lost a brother! Because of you, of your influence on the media and the justice. Stan didn't leave because of his murder, he left because he killed the wife of a journalist!
Your family will undergo my moods and my wish. I am not sure to keep them in good condition for a long time. This e-mail is not intended to hold you to ransom because I have nothing to ask you. Finally, maybe a small million pounds would accelerate the relaease process of your relatives... Up to you. I hope that this e-mail will reach you... My greetings.

hechoumazuka
hechoumazuka
Niveau 6
01 juin 2008 à 16:21:29

Hello Steve,
I think that you know why do I write to you. I don't want you needlessly to worry... I call your attention to the fact that your dirty wife and your brat are well-fed and are comfortably housed, at the moment. I only want you to suffer as I suffered. I remind you some facts : in July 3rd, 1990, Stan Kins died, executed on the electric chair. Yes, I lost a brother! Because of you, of your influence on the media and the justice. Stan didn't leave because of his murder, he left because he killed the wife of a journalist!
Your family will undergo my moods and my wish. I am not sure to keep it in good conditions for a long time. This e-mail is not intended to hold you to ransom because I have nothing to ask to you. Finally, maybe a small million pounds would accelerate the release process of your relatives... Up to you. I hope that this e-mail will reach you... My greetings.

hechoumazuka
hechoumazuka
Niveau 6
01 juin 2008 à 16:23:41

...Mais il se peut qu'il reste encore des erreurs; après tout, je ne suis pas prof d'anglais ^^
Bonne chance :ok:

Computing
Computing
Niveau 8
01 juin 2008 à 17:53:57

I think that you know why do I write to you.

Pas de "do" ici il me semble

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