à tous!

Dans le cadre d'une sortie scolaire, j'ai eu à répondre (en anglais) à quelques questions concernant mon voyage et j'aimerai vous montrer mes réponses, que vous m'aidiez à pallier aux éventuels fautes (grammaire/compréhension etc.)

Ci-dessous les questions en français et les réponses correspondantes en anglais :

1.Quel est votre meilleur souvenir de ce voyage ?

I don't really have any "best" memories beaucause for me all of this travel was just great! Every people we met, every moments when we were together, as a big family, all of this will burn in our heart forever!
Moreover, Villa Bahia stay the best place i ever seen in USA : a small and beautiful town, almost like a paradize! It Sounds great!

2.Ce qui vous a le plus choqué ?

Actually, seeing the tension beetween pupil at San Diego had really had an impact to me. To be honest, i never though it would have such a problem overthere.
Latinos and afro-américain are fighting each other many time, that's why many police officer stay around high school.
No matter what we can say about our country, it's impossible for me to picture this situation in France, at *****.

3.Est ce que votre perception des Etats-Unis et du Mexique a changé après votre voyage ? Et pourquoi ?

Like everybody, i idealized USA as a beautiful town without any disadvantage but step by step i became aware of the difference beetween people. There, everyone judge you and noone is free, on the contrary of what i tough first. Even if USA sound like a dream for most of people, this a country where there is many fights and social problem. Mexico is a bit scary espescially when you hear about kidnapping or murders...

4.Suite à ce voyage, votre regard sur la France a-t-il changé ?

Thanks to that travel, We realized how lucky we are to live in a country like France. We benefits from aid that americain people don't have and in addition french people don't make such a difference about your origin. Yet americain do. We live in a safe place although USA is a bit more dangerous.

Voilà, c'est pour l'instant tout.
En vous remerciant chaleureusement de vos aides futures!

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Des profs d'anglais corrigeront ton texte.

To be honest, i never though it would have such a problem overthere.

It would be je crois

here, everyone judge you and noone is free, on the contrary of what i tough first.

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We live in a safe place although USA is a bit more dangerous.

cette phrase sonne bizarre
tu dis que la france est un endroit sure malgré que les USA soient un peu plus dangereux

Je voulais plutôt dire "alors que... Tandis que..."

Grand merci à toi en tout cas!

be-students > J'irai y faire un tour, merci bien ;)

1.Quel est votre meilleur souvenir de ce voyage ?

I don't really have any "best" memories beaucause for me all of this travel was just great! Every people we met, every moment when we were together, as a big family, all of this will burn in our heart forever!
Moreover, Villa Bahia remains the best place I've ever seen in USA : a small and beautiful town, almost like a paradise! It Sounds great!

2.Ce qui vous a le plus choqué ?

Actually, seeing the tension beetween pupil at San Diego really had an impact to me. To be honest, I never though it would have such a problem overthere.
Latinos and african-americains are fighting each other many time, that's why many police officer stay around high school.
No matter what we can say about our country, it's impossible for me to picture this situation in France, at *****.

3.Est ce que votre perception des Etats-Unis et du Mexique a changé après votre voyage ? Et pourquoi ?

Like everybody, I idealized USA as a beautiful town without any disadvantage but step by step i became aware of the difference beetween people. There, everyone judges you and no one is free, on the contrary of what i tough first. Even if USA sound like a dream for most of people, this a country where there are many fights and social problems. Mexico is a bit scary espescially when you hear about kidnapping or murders...

4.Suite à ce voyage, votre regard sur la France a-t-il changé ?

Thanks to that travel, We realized how lucky we are to live in a country like France. We benefits from aid that americain people don't have and in addition french people don't make such a difference about your origin. Yet americain do. We live in a safe place although USA is a bit more dangerous.