Voici ma redac en anglais que je dois rendre.
Mais voila, je sent que mon essai est rempli de fautes mais que je ne vois pas
Pourrez vous m´aider Merci 
All the children whom I know dream to become adult, but they haven’t experience adult
And all adults whom I know want to come back childhood. And they know already childhood. So I must deduce some Childhood is the best moment in life. But I’m not sure
When ²²²we were children, or teenagers
We were naive, we like dreaming, and we are always happy. We want all the time to have a good time We don’t realize about the problems on the world. ,
At the beginning, we thought life is magic (We believed to Father Christmas, Flowers makes Baby)
we are happy with100 little thing.(with toys, to make a grimace)
We imagine our future,
We didn’t know the adult’s problem, we don’t know money’s problem
The love stories are simpler
In fact, we are unconscious
We want only to be happy with our friends without worrying other thing
But when we become a adult, it’s different
All adults say childhood is a good time, children have 15 weeks holydays, we don’t earn money, and they think school is the best moment in life, However they hated this when they were children
But To be an adult is great too, we are independant, we can to make what do we want. It’s pleasant
We can eat at Mc DO every day if we want. We can enter in disco without problem.
Finally, I think Adult have more influence on the others than children
But, they are some inconveniants; we must to earn money to live alone
We are stress about our jobs. We have only 5 weeks vacances generally
We try to find désespérement the love of our life to buid a family
But when we have a baby, it’s very magic. C’est a notre tour d’etre parents
Finally, I think the best moment of life is the childhood, but I’m not sure
Now, I can’t tell you what is the great moment in life
It isn’t I haven’t opinion about this question
But I am child yet, I haven’t got an experience adult, and I’m sure to be adult is too a great moment.
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