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correction d'une lettre en anglais

aurelsmxcj
aurelsmxcj
Niveau 10
10 octobre 2007 à 21:00:29

Bonsoir à tous,

voilà je devais faire une lettre en anglais et j´aimerais bien que l´on me le dise les fautes à corriger :

England, 7 Street of the chapel
12 October 1893

Dear mother and father,

I write you a letter to tell about English society. In fact, I was invited by Lady Hunstanton in a wealthy country house in England. There is an other person with us, Lady Caroline. We have speak about English and American societies. How they were really pleasant during this discution! And I’m keen on her sympathy. I hope to tell my discution between this Lady Caroline and Lady Hunstanton and myself. It raises an important issue ; in fact, we must weigh the pros and cons about English and American societies. During this discution, I describe the American society with a positive vision. On the one hand, I describe American society as a country with rules, as a society based on economic development and where social classes don’t exist. It seems to me that English society hasn’t evolved and is completely old-fashioned! What a pity! Nevertheless, on the other hand, the English Ladies must be surprised and shocked and even offended by my words because for her opinion, appears to be completely based on appearances and Lady Hunstanton notices isn’t the social criticism of the English society. What nonsense! However, I fancy they stay calm and polite!
On the whole, Lady Caroline and Lady Hunstanton are in favour of the English aristocracy even though I respect their point of view. In a nutshell, I can’t help thinking that the English and American are different.
I’m looking forward to joining you.

I hope that you read to me up to the end, goodbye.

Hester

Merci à ceux qui m´auront lu et qui m´aideront :)

progamerxbox
progamerxbox
Niveau 10
10 octobre 2007 à 21:07:50

Mets tout au passé.

"We have speak" --> We spoke
"I’m looking forward to joining you" --> to join you
"for her opinion" --> to her
"development and where social classes don’t exist" --> development where social classes don´t exist

aurelsmxcj
aurelsmxcj
Niveau 10
10 octobre 2007 à 21:10:26

Merci :ok:

D´autres remarques ? :)

progamerxbox
progamerxbox
Niveau 10
10 octobre 2007 à 21:11:12

Et je commencerais pas "Dear mother, dear father".

"I hope that you read to me up to the end" --> I hope you read me up to the end

progamerxbox
progamerxbox
Niveau 10
10 octobre 2007 à 21:11:40

Attends quand même que d´autres confirment ou non ce que je dis. J´ai eu que 11 au bac... :(

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