j´ai besoin de vous pour m´aidez à corriger ce texte en Anglais...Ceci me tiens très à coeur...

Andrew comes in the lawyer’s office of one of theses childhood’s friend. He knock at the door and goes into the room.

-Hi John? Do I disturb you?
-No Andrew, sit down please, you are welcome. Why are you here?
-You will never guess, I am fired.
-What?!
-Fired I said. I need your help and your experience, to press charges against my senior partners.
-I am with you. But why are you fired?
-Because I am infected by AIDS.

-Ok, we will hurt them. Listen Andrew, as you know, the best way to process your employer is to found charges the most quickly as possible. So try to search the maximum of evidences of their discrimination, everything which can play in our favour. During this time, I will decide of the most intelligent way to attack the direction of your ex lawyer’s office.

-Thanks John, I know that you were a trusted friend…
-I will win this trial for you and for the other person discriminated. You can be sure of that, they will regret to dismiss you.
-I hope, but you know, they are very powerful and influential… They never let you reach them…Moreover, they didn’t tell me clearly the real reason of my redundancy, they told me that it was for a professional reason, and so we had to prove that is discrimination …
-Don’t worried, it will be surely hard, maybe the trial of my life, but we will win, we have the law in our side, never forgot that. So don’t lose time go to search your evidences and me I will work your new folder.

J´ai surtout besoin de vous pour traduire ces phrases:

Andrew entre dans le cabinet d´avocat d´un de ses amis d´enfance.
Traduction:
Andrew comes in the lawyer’s office of one of theses childhood’s friend.

Viré je te dis.
Traduction:
Fired I said.

J´ai besoin de tes services.
Traduction:
I need your help.

On va les faire couler.
Traduction:
We will hurt them

Merci beaucoup, c´est très important pour moi...
À charge de revanche!

Andrew entre dans le cabinet d´avocat d´un de ses amis d´enfance.

Traduction:
Andrew comes in the lawyer’s office of one of theses childhood’s friend.

Theses : non, il faut mettre "his" qui fait référence à Andrew, qui est un homme.
Je n´ai jamais rencontré l´expression "ami d´enfance" donc je sais pas si il y a mieux que ce que tu proposes.

Viré je te dis.
Traduction:
Fired I said.

Bonne traduction je pense

J´ai besoin de tes services.
Traduction:
I need your help.

Idem

On va les faire couler.
Traduction:
We will hurt them

Ayant lu le texte plus qu´en diagonale, "les faire couler"=les descendre professionellement ? car je pense que "hurt" fait plus référence à une blessure physique.

Pour la dernière je pencherais pour un
"We´re gonna kick´em off!!!" ^^

Un peu moins correct mais tellement beau f:ou:

Un peu familier tout de même :p je doute que les profs apprécient ce genre d´expression

Merci àvous mais j´ai finallement trouvé.

Andrew comes into the law office of one of his childhood friends. He knocks at the door and goes into the room.

-Hello John, am I disturbing you?
-No Andrew, come in, please sit down, what brings you here?
-You will never guess, I have been fired.
-What?!
-I am telling you, I have been fired. I need your help and your experience, to press charges against my senior partners.
-I am with you. But why have you been fired?
-Because I am infected by AIDS.
-We can get back at them. Listen Andrew, as you know, the best way to get your employer is to find as many charges as possible. Get as much evidence as you can of discrimination, anything that might work in our favour. During this time, I will decide of the most intelligent way to attack the direction of your ex lawyer’s office.
-Thanks John, I knew that you were a trusted friend…
-I will win this trial for you and for the other people who have been discriminated against. You can be sure of that they will be sorry they fired you.
-I hope, but you know, they are very powerful and influential… They never let you reach them…Moreover, they didn’t tell me clearly the real reason of my discharge, they told me that it was for a professional reason, and so we have to prove that it was discrimination …
-Don’t worry, it will surely be hard, maybe the trial of my life, but we will win, we have the law on our side, never forget that. So don’t waste time, go look for evidence and I will work on your case.

Tu bosserais pas sur Philadelphia toi ?

Le film avec Tom Hanks? Oui mais sur un extrait seulement...