Bonjour,
j´ai un exposé pour Lundi en anglais , j´ai essayer de corriger au maximum mes fautes , de vocabulaire , expression , grammaire , si vous pouviez me donner un coup de main 
"i am going to talk about video games , because it is my favorit hobby .
My first experience began when i was 4 years old , with the NES .
I want to share my passion with you and i hope you will like it.
Video games started in 1962 with a game called Pong .
and then many many companies starting working in the video games industry, like Nintendo with the Super nintendo , the gameboy ...,
Sony with the Playstation, And most recently Microsoft with the Xbox .
It´s a real business , most bigger than the Film industry.
It´ an art ! to create a video game , you must write a scenario, must create a universe , real or not ,
and good music to go with it.
Like the legend of zelda , Or medal of honnor , Mario ....
The videos games were born approximately in 1950 , with an idea of Raplh baer .
It´s specially The game pong , and The nes of nintendo into 1985 , which opened a new way .
I love video games , because it allow me to dream , to travel in imaginary world , and i can do thing , i can´t do in real life.
Everyone can play video games.
Some video game are very interresting , Second life for example , in this game we have social aspect , you have a virtual second life ,
You can build building , you can build your house , and discuss with other people who are also connect , and share idea , organize policy debates .
We have other game like GTA , in this role game , you are a gangster , and you can stole cars , kill people , use weapons , organize steering .
Some of you , say it is very violent , but in my opinion , it allow me to control myself in real life , and it allow me to escape."
