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[TS] Redac Anglais sur la Russie (help)

clem_tj77
clem_tj77
Niveau 6
23 février 2007 à 00:38:12

Voilà, j´ai besoin de gens (confirmés) pour m´aider à corriger ça (qui est tout bon normalement) :oui:

On November 23, Alexander Litvinenko, former Russian KGB officer, died in a London hospital. He was also an important opponent to Vladimir Putin’s regime and that’s a dangerous situation today, even in the UK.

To critic Putin, Litvinenko didn’t mince words; on October 19, at a public meeting in London he accused the Russian president of having organized the murder of Anna Politkovskaya, a crusading journalist fighting against the war in Chechnya. There, mass-scale human-rights violations and state-level terror still are the order of the day.

Litvinenko started feeling ill on November 1. The London doctors who attended Litvinenko’s bedside quickly suspected that some kind of radioactive agent was causing his decline: his hair was falling, his athlete’s body was shriveling, his bone marrow was falling, as if he had been exposed to huge radiations. But nothing unusual was found in his blood or urine. As doctors ruled out a slew of increasingly obscure toxins and bugs, the patient’s condition worsened. In desperation, they sent the removals to Britain’s Atomic Weapons Establishment which has equipment beyond the reach of any hospital. There, experts discovered alpha particles that can be destroyed by any sheet of paper but that destroy everything they touch. They were shown to come from the rare isotope Polonium 210. Anyway, it was already too late for Litvinenko. A scientist declared that the murderers obviously did not expect that polonium would be found, but it was, and the use of a radioactive element so hard to create and to transport proves that the murderers were very well organized, like Russians secret services are.

The victim has no doubt where the search for his killer would lead: on his deathbed he said his death had been ordered by Vladimir Putin. Russians officials have denied that as a malicious provocation. Not surprisingly, Britain is being punctilious about amassing sufficient evidence before it points a finger in any direction. But if some shadowy figures close to the Kremlin turn to be responsible for Litvinenko’s death, it would be the most astonishing indictment of just how ruthless the modern Russian state can be. All that, as yet, remains unproved.

More and more dissidents appear in Russia. Like Litvinenko and Politkovskaya, they fight for a better Russia, a democratic Russia and not one ruled by fear and violence like the one Putin has created. They are waiting for a backlash; for them some counterweight to this lunacy must emerge. No one knows how long it will take but Russia’s post-communist era is going to its end.

Si vous voyez des fautes, n´hésitez pas :o))
Et les améliorations aussi !

clem_tj77
clem_tj77
Niveau 6
23 février 2007 à 01:36:18

:up:

Pseudo supprimé
Pseudo supprimé 23 février 2007 à 01:43:24

00:38:12
01:36:18

Sois patient et laisse les gens dormir, ils te répondront demain!

Tidus1188
Tidus1188
Niveau 10
23 février 2007 à 01:45:30

Aujourd´hui tu veux dire :o))

clem_tj77
clem_tj77
Niveau 6
23 février 2007 à 10:15:54

on est aujourd´hui
:up:

clem_tj77
clem_tj77
Niveau 6
23 février 2007 à 11:30:46

dernier paragraphe (conclusion) modifié

More and more dissidents appear in Russia. Like Litvinenko and Politkovskaya, they fight for a better Russia, a democratic Russia and not the one ruled by fear and violence Putin created. They are waiting for a backlash. For them, some counterweight to this lunacy must emerge. No one knows how long it will take but Russia’s post-communist era is going to its end.

:up:

clem_tj77
clem_tj77
Niveau 6
23 février 2007 à 12:34:14

:up:

Tidus1188
Tidus1188
Niveau 10
23 février 2007 à 12:36:09

Down :o))

clem_tj77
clem_tj77
Niveau 6
23 février 2007 à 12:42:19

aide moi au lieu de faire le malin ...
:nah:

clem_tj77
clem_tj77
Niveau 6
23 février 2007 à 15:40:47

:up:

je vais avoir des crampes à force d´upper ...

ZombieDeMatiti
ZombieDeMatiti
Niveau 8
23 février 2007 à 15:45:11

"More and more dissidents appear in Russia. Like Litvinenko and Politkovskaya, they fight for a better Russia"

Je dirais plutot (mais je suis pas sur) :

"More and more dissidents appear in Russia, like Litvinenko and Politkovskayan, who are fighting for a better Russia".

Je suis au lycée là, j´ai anglais dans environ 5 minutes au moment où j´écris ce message, dès que je rentre chez moi je regarde ça en entier :p

clem_tj77
clem_tj77
Niveau 6
23 février 2007 à 18:04:31

moi je veux dire que beaucoup d´autres se battent pour une meilleure Russie
toi tu dis que Litvinenko et Politkovskaya se battent pour une meilleure Russie

Je change rien pour l´instant
Mais :merci: quand même

clem_tj77
clem_tj77
Niveau 6
23 février 2007 à 19:19:14

:up:

Bonitor
Bonitor
Niveau 10
23 février 2007 à 19:36:12

Pas vraiment , le who peut librement se rapporter à la premiere partie de phrase.

Ton idée reste dans ce cas la totalement conservée.

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