Bon je suis très mauvais en anglais, et je dois rendre un travail pour mercredi prochain, voici le début, qqun pourrait me le corriger svp ca serait super super sympa

Love me tender

Love me tender is a song sing by Elvis Presley and wrote by Ken Darby. This signer is renamed The King. He sall more than 2 milliards album in the world. That’ s one of biggest singer in the world.

The song is wrote for a film where Elvis is actor. The film talk about the war of cessession. The fans of the singer were indignant because her idole of rock was in a blade western but the film had success. And the song became one of the biggest famous for Elvis.

The song talk about the love of a man for a woman. The man ask the love of the woman.

Tiens, j´ai essayé de corrigé et de remanier tes phrases :

Love me tender

Love me tender is a song. The singer is Elvis Presley and the writer is Ken Darby. This singer is renamed « The King ». He sold more than 2 biliards of albums in/on the world. That’s one of the biggest singer in/on the world.

The song was write for a film where Elvis is one of the actors. This movie talks about the war of cessession. The fans of the singer were indignant because their rock idole was in a blade western but the movie was a big success. In top of that, this song became one of the most famous of Elvis Presley.

Et ta dernière phrase n´est pas très développée ...

Je pense qu´il doit quand même rester des fautes dans mon texte mais c´est mieux que rien.

"The song was writen for a film where Elvis was one of the actors."

;)

Et 2 billions aussi^^ . Sinon, ta correction tient à peu près la route. J´aurais quand même fait des phrases plus complexes mais bon...

merci beaucoup, daft_punk tu me sauves ma vie^^ Bon je vais commencer la deuxième partie où je dois analyser la chanson.

Si tu as encore besoin d´aide n´hésite pas

Pourquoi "2 billions" ça ne va pas ?

voila je dois anlyser les paroles de la chanson, mais je ne sais pas quoi mettre, car je trouve que ca a pas trop de sens la chanson^^

voici les paroles:

Love me tender,
love me sweet,
never let me go.
You have made my life complete,
and I love you so.

Love me tender,
love me true,
all my dreams fulfilled.
For my darlin´ I love you,
and I always will.

Love me tender,
love me long,
take me to your heart.
For it´s there that I belong,
and we´ll never part.

Love me tender,
love me dear,
tell me you are mine.
I´ll be yours through all the years,
till the end of time.

si vous pouviez me donner des idées ou une piste où creuser ca serait super sympa

The song was writen for a film

j´aurai utilisé "has been" nan?

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