Salut, je dois faire un résumé en anglais sur mon stage que j´ai fait le mois dernier. J´ai tout fait et je vous demande juste de voir s´il n´y a pas trop de fautes ;)

Les 3 services dans lesquelles j´ai travailler étaient la Compta client, le risque client et le recouvrement. Je sais pas si j´ai bien traduis ça en anglais...

VOila le résumé :

"This training period allowed me to observe the "Customers accounting", " Customers risk" and ´´paiements´ services. These are 3 different services, their purposes are different but they are linked inside the company. It means that we are not always alone in our service, but sometimes we have to work with the other services because of a special problem or something else which is in relation with an other service. I found that was interesting.

The first week, i worked in the "Customers Accounting" service. It is somewhat basic and very repetitive : you have to do each day the same activities, excepted when there is a special problem. I did not really enjoy that.

Then, i worked in the "Customers Risk" service where the clients are examinated to know if we can allow them a guarantee or not. It was more interesting than the "Customers Accounting" as I had to reflect more (account analysis, computing...). In this service, we are also closer to the customer.

For the last week, I worked in the "Recouvrement" service. I had to call customers who didnt pay yet their invoice. It was really nice, because there we are directly in contact with the customer, and there is more diversity.

In conclusion, this training period allowed me to observe in detail these 3 different services and discover the working world and I really enjoyed that"

Merci

Up svp ;)

Sympa...

je l´ai lu vite fait :

(...) where the clients are examinated to know if we (...)

"were examinating" je pense plutôt

(...) I had to call customers who didnt pay yet their invoice (...)

"yet" toujours en fin de phrase si mes souvenirs sont bons.

(...) and there is more diversity. (...)

and there is more diversity in doing that.

In conclusion (...)

to conclude, we can say ...

in detail
more precisly

naaaaaaaan "where the clients are examinated"

voix passif !! il n´ya PAS d´erreur de grammaire dans cette phrase contrairement a ce que dis saviola

"yet toujours en fin de phrase" pas necessairement

sinan dans l´ensemble bien qu´il n´y ai pas d ´erreur de grammaires a proprement parlé je trouve le style un peu lourd et la logique des differents temps curieuse .

passive*

Merci à vous

Tu peux utiliser "Eventually" à la place de "In conclusion" (j´ignore d´ailleurs si on peut employer cette expression)

"This training period allowed me to observe"

Tu utilises deux cette même formule, au mot près, ce qui fait une répétition. Deplus ça se trouve en tout début et en toute fin, donc c´est très voyant.