Bonjour, pouvez vous m´aider à trouver les fautes de ma rédaction d´anglais qui doit en être bourrée ....

One day, my grand-father asked my father, aged of 6 years old, and his brother (my uncle) to keep his butcher’s shop while he bought something. MY father saw his friends who played soccer; his brother told him to go to play with them, he will say anything to their father. Nevertheless, when my grand-father came back, he discovered that there was less money in the till. My uncle swore he didn’t steal, that’s why, my father was confined in the cold storage! A neighbour heard shouts of my father and saved him and that’s the end, nevertheless some years later, my uncle confessed his lie and finally, they went into fits of laughter.

Merci

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One day, my grand-father asked my father, aged of 6 years old, and his brother (my uncle) to keep his butcher ´ s shop while he bought something. MY father saw his friends who played soccer; his brother told him to go to play with them, he will say anything to their father. Nevertheless, when my grand-father came back, he discovered that there was less money in the till. My uncle swore he didn ´ t steal that ´ s why, my father was confined in the cold storage! A neighbour heard shouts of my father and saved him and that ´ s the end, nevertheless some years later, my uncle confessed his lie and finally, they went into fits of laughter.

Merci

Ce n´est pas très très long à lire.

Il n´y a vraiment personne pour m´aider, ca prend 2 minutes tout au plus à lire et 1 minute pour me dire les fautes.

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