drague à deux balles
y a pas mal de fautes dans ton texte ...
The scene takes place nowadays in England.
Tom, a sixteen years old boy met a beautiful girl NAMED Ashley in a MacDonald :
"-Hi girl (?), said Tom.
-Hi, responded coldly Ashley.
-I´m sorry to disturb you but I was wondering what would I do to have your phone number ?, asked Tom.
-You don´t know me and you want me to give you my phone number ? muttered the girl
-Eh, don´t be so angry, you´re too shy. I just wanted a phone number."
Then the boy left the restaurant and went away.
bizarre ton histoire 