I write to you because I would like to register me in your school and I wish to receive a document which presents the courses to practise in your school and I would like to also know if there are places in your schools for the foreign student

vous pouvez me corriger les fautes que j´ai pu laisser je remercie ceux qui peuvent m´aider et j´aimerais savoir aussi où je peux trouver la règle sur les verbes pronominaux merci beaucoup pour ceux qui m´aideront

I´m writing to you because I´m interested in registering in your school; I wish to receive a document which presents the class schedule. I would also like to know if places are available for foreign students in your educational establishment.

En gros c´est ce que j´améliorerai...à toi de voir. Ca me rappelle que j´ai la même lettre à écrire moi...

Petites modifs: on évite les abréviations: I am, et I would au lieu de I´m et I´d. Sinon I would like to register your school me parait plus léger (ya pas de in après register).

re modif, c´est register with your school