Bonjour
Voilà j´ai un petit essai de 250 mots à faire sur la musique, pourriez vous me corrigez svp

Subject : Xhat does the word " music " suggest to you ?

According ton a wise man, Musics soften people´s moods. So, wse knoow that it has a lot of quality. The first one is the pleasure when we listen to it. For many people, it´s a real hobby. People have lisened to it for two thousands years and more. This art survives with the time, so it´s giving an idea on his power. For someone it´s a source of pleasure, an for an other one it helps us to forget his sorrows. It can be a veritable rythm for our life.
On the middle-ages, people worked on the boat with music, now they dance with. Its fonction has changed with the years but is too important.

Ca normalement c´est bon

For me, music is a veritable way on the unity of the different people. During concerts, different people who come from different ethnic groups are enojying themselves together.
Music help me to wake up, to be calm or concentrated. It cann too express my feeling of the moment. If I am sad, I listen to a sad music. Music is helping to express our creativity and your personnality.
Music is an art which is well to every art. Music in an international language. So, who don´t have already listen to the music ? In order ton conclu, we can see that there is a lot of probleme with music´s download indeed people want to have the most of it.
The firts mens who play music for first time certainly didn´t expect that music would have this big one success.

Voilà, merci a ceux qui prendront le temps de me lire. Ne tenez pas compte du propos en lui même parce que c´est du n´importe quoi