y´a des phrases je comprend même pas ce que t´as essayé de dire :x
Enfin bref je vais essayer d´en corriger quelques unes.
No, his is graduate from harvard ->"No he is a graduate from Harvard" ou bien "No, he graduated from Harvard"
His father died in vietnam ->juste
He was 3 offers for his job ->"He got/received 3 offers for his job"?
They offered him a bmw car, they helped find a house
They want the secretaries were old ->j´ai pas compris (il veulent que les secrétaires soient vielles , c´est ça oO?)
He is in charge of the securitiy -> je pense que c´est juste
Lambert invited mitch and abby dinner and a men, who works for lambert installs microphones illegaly -> faut tout mettre au prétérit : Lambert invited mitch and abby to dinner and a man, who worked for Lambert installed ....
Voila, je suis pas 100% sûr de moi donc tu peux toujours vérifier.
Bye.