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The author wnats to talk about the grip of independence of the children and their leaving from home. All the children want to live like adults and to have theirindependence , ut they are too young and have few experiences. They can’t afford to look forward . Moreover , the children always need assistance of their parents.
Thus the children must respect the rules and be dependant on their parents

In the BD , the autor makes fun of Calvin showing the nonsense of his attitude. Calvin want to be adult and to leave home without the assistance of his parents , whereas he will ask help to their parents .Calvin s completely absurd. Above , the Calvin’s attitude reprensents the opinion of author about this subject.

To conclude, the authore thinks the attitude of this kind of children is nosenses and he show that tomaking fun of Calvin

merci d´avance

The author wants to talk about the grip of independence of the children and their leaving from home. The children want to live like adults to have their independence but they are too young and they don´t have any experience. They can’t afford to look forward . Moreover , the children always need assistance from their parents.
Thus the children must respect the rules and be dependant of their parents

In the BD , the autor makes fun of Calvin showing the no sense of his attitude. Calvin wants to be adult and to leave home without the assistance of his parents , whereas he will ask help to their parents .Calvin is completely absurd. Above , the Calvin’s attitude reprensents the opinion of the author about this subject.

To conclude, the author thinks the attitude of this kind of children is nosenses and he show that to making fun of Calvin

Pas the devant children

pas de the devant rules

Wnats the author to leave in order about the grasp of the independence from the children and them to to speak from the house. All children want to have lived the theirindependence, ut as adults and that they are too much the young people and few experiences have. They can’t take the liberty to look at forward. In all other respects the children always need the assistance of their family members. So the children must respect the rules, and on their parentsIn data base to depend makes that for author the pleasure of Calvin, which shows the nonsense of its attitude. Calvin want to have arisen and have left from the house without assistance of its family members, while it will require the assistance for her family members. Calvin s absurd completion. Over reprensents the attitude of Calvin’s the opinion of the author regarding this topic. Over to close the authore thinks that the attitude of this kind of children is nosenses, and it to that the pleasure tomaking of Calvin shows