Hello,
je dois faire un dialogue en anglais, je viens de l´ecrire et j´aimerais si c´est correct et si la syntaxe est bonne :
Shannon Ryan was an Irish teenager and she had to announce to her mother that she had leave to New-York next day to try her chance in the USA and earn money to help her family whose join her when she got a lot of money :
“Good morning mom, I’ve something to tell to you” Shannon told to her mother
“Oh you look, hum, anxious, what do you wanna to say to me?” she asked
“You know, we are needy since the death of dad, I can’t keep to work as a farmer” said Shannon
“Well, and what do you what to do for help us? You know, it’s hard for everyone since the great famine we’re all needy!” she exclaimed
“I’ve to do something, you know, like, hum, try my luck to an other place, you know, like the USA” Hesitated Shannon
“What ?! You can’t! Your life is here! The USA, are you crazy?! It’s so far!” she screamed
“It’s to late mom, I’ve save a lot of money for this travel, I’ve to do this now, I leave tomorrow, and you know, you’ll can join me when I’ll have earn much money” she retorted
“Oh my god it’s just crazy! But if you think it’s a good thing for you, hum, you had to do this, I’m not agree with this” she said, “You must promise me that you’ll be careful!” she forbade.
Merci
