Salut !!
Alors voila on a eu des correspondants en anglais , et il va falloir repondre a leur lettre

Ce sont des canadiens (tabarnac(mais non c´est pas des kébékwa)) donc c´est pas impossible que j´ai utilisé des expressions typyquement anglaises ou americaines ...

Voila ce que j´ai deja redactionner , pouvez vous me corriger svp ? (surtout pour les temps je crois )

alors :

Hello .....!
How are you ?
Your letter done me please (c´est censé vouloir dire ta lettre m´a fait plaisir lol)
My name is ....
I am 14
I´m 5fts 8in and a bit thin(je crois que c´est ca 1.70)
I´m brown-eyed .
My hairs are long and brown too.
I am an obstinate person (têtue) , but i´m polite calm , curious ,shy, serious and nice
I live with my parents and my sister in a little village near the city where my school is.
I like to listen music (every kinds , exept jazz) , read and write poems , and be alone ...
And you , what do you like ?

At school , we have more lessons than you by day ...You will found my timetable (emploi du temps ?) with my letter .
Every school days I wake up at 5:50 AM and fall asleep at 10:00PM

My favorite lesson is english because I think it can be useful to speak english in foreigners countrys

Did you ever come in france ? If you never come , you have to do because i think it is a beautiful country , but not anywhere ( )

But Canada must be magnificent too , and i would to visit this country a day

as it is probably the only letter I can write to you before we change penfriends ,(in december I suppose ) I let you my e-mail adress for speak by internet

I hope that you will like my letter ,
....

Walla !! !
Merci beaucoup de me dire mes erreurs !

"for speak by internet" > "TO speak..."

my hair is hair=chevelure
if you never came , je crois
i would LIKE to
SOME day
pour le "i let you" je suis pas sur
sinon le reste me parrai bien

"Your letter done me please"
your letter pleased me

"You will found my timetable"
You will find my timetable

"I can write to you"
I can write you

"adress for speak"
adress to speak

merci beaucoup !! ! Alors i let you je le remplace par i give you ? et si je change if you never coma par if you never came , je remplace aussi did you ever come par did you ever came ?o u je le laisse ?

merci

en fait, je crois que c´est
have you ever been to france? if not, you should, because i thing....
je pense que ce sera mieux

I like to listen music ==> to listen to music il me semble

djiji Posté le 18 octobre 2006 à 18:05:23 en fait, je crois que c´est
have you ever been to france? if not, you should, because i thing....
je pense que ce sera mieux

==> I think c´est encore mieux ^^

Bon je pense que y´en a d´autres, mais j´ai la flemme de vérifier ´^^

C´est "I like listening". Le reste a déjà été dit je pense^^

Bon finalement j´ai quand même regardé ^^

Tu veux dire quoi par "i think it is a beautiful country , but not anywhere "

Sinon exept s´écrit except, et je crois que c´est tout, j´avais un doute sur "my favourite lesson is english" je croyais que c´était the english, mais en fait je crois que c´est bon, j´ai voulu franciser un peu trop ^_^

Il veut dire "not everywhere" je pense.

ouais c´est ca :p merci beaucoup tt le monde !