ben voila j´ai un petit paragraphe a faire en Anglais j´aimerais juste que vous me disiez si il y a beaucoup de fautes de syntaxe et de grammaire au moins je pourrais les corriger

Do you sympathise with Tim? why or why not? Justify

No I don´t sympathise with Tim, because he wants to hang around with boys who have a bad influence and who are half-doped and it´s dangerous for him. I think Tim´s parents have right. Tim must to work at school, it´s important. He shouldn´t spend so much time with his mates...

voila

Pas de "to" après tout modal comme "must".

Tim´s parents ARE right

ok j´ai aussi rajouté: He must studying for GCSE

Verbe à l´infinitif après le modal.

ok autrement c´est bon?!

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