Salut

Demain ,j´ai anglais en groupe et je dois faire un ptit debat . Mon sujet c´est "commentles langue peuvent rapporcher les peuples"

Mais j´ai preparer un ecrit de quoi m´aider pour debat . C´est l´arguementation . J´aimerai si possible qu´une personne me corrige svp

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In Belgium, 3 languages are official, French, Dutch, Flemish and German in minority. These 3 languages come from 3 different cultures. We can use these 3 languages to communicate in Belgium.
This operation makes it possible to join together munch cultures. For example, the TV show films in these 3 languages. These processes does not cause any problem.

Nevertheless, it is not always the case. In Switzerland, there are strong separations between the areas about the spoken language. There are also 3 official languages, Italian, German and French. Switzerland is cut in 3 areas by borders because of this process.
The German areas are separated by strict borders with the Italian and French areas. One can say in the same way for these 2 areas
Even if in more the share of the cases, the languages brings closer the people and their culture like Belgium, but one should not neglect some cases like Switzerland."

merci :D :D

j´ai pas vu de gros erreur, peut etre un oubli de "s" a "say" dans la phrase "one can say.."
et un "s" en trop a "brings" puisque languages est au pluriel , non ?

Alors c´est cool merci bcp

excusemoi du double poste et de ce que je vais dire , mais t pas un peu trop jeune pour corrigé ce genre de texte...

sauf ton respect, je suis aussi vieux que toi, et ce texte est super simple a comprendre, je ne vois donc pas où est le problème...

et si tu veux parler d´age, je peux te dire qu´il y a des gamines de 14 ans qui sont meilleurs en math et physique de des millions de gens dans le monde... et pour ma part, j´ai un niveau assez élevé en anglais (moyenne > 16 l´année derniere), donc voila, prend ce que je te dis si tu le veux ou pas

"For example, the TV show films in these 3 languages"

C´est la télé qui "show", donc shows, non?

"These processes does not cause any problem. "

Pluriel -> Do not.

Sinon le texte est pas dur du tout

In Belgium, 3 languages are official, French, Dutch, Flemish and German in minority. These 3 languages come from 3 different cultures. We can use these 3 languages to communicate in Belgium.
This operation makes it possible to join together munch cultures. For example, the TV show films in these 3 languages. These processes does not cause any problem.

Nevertheless, it is not always the case. In Switzerland, there are strong separations between the areas about the spoken language. There are also 3 official languages, Italian, German and French. Switzerland is cut in 3 areas by borders because of this process.
The German areas are separated by strict borders with the Italian and French areas. One can say in the same way for these 2 areas
Even if in more the share of the cases, the languages brings closer the people and their culture like Belgium, but one should not neglect some cases like Switzerland."

In Belgium, there are three official languages which are the following: French, Dutch, Flemish and German as a minority.
These 3 languages come from 3 different cultures. We can use these 3 languages in order to communicate in Belgium.
Therefore it is possible to blend a lot of cultures.
For example, the TV movies and sitcoms are in these 3 languages. Such a thing does not induce any issues at all

Nevertheless, this isn´t always the case. In Switzerland, there are strong gaps between the areas concerniong the spoken language. There are also 3 official languages, Italian, German and French. Switzerland is divided into 3 areas by borders because of this.
The German areas are separated by harsh borders with the Italian and French areas. One can say in the same way for these 2 areas ( j´ai pas compris cette phrase )
Even if in more the share of the cases, languages bring people closer together and closer to their culture like in Belgium, but one should not neglect some cases like Switzerland."

voila pour la correction, la il n´y a plus aucune faute
et si jamais tu as des doutes, ne t´inquietes pas je suis bilingue anglais francais