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[1eSTG / Anglais] Expression écrite

VENER6
VENER6
Niveau 7
20 mai 2006 à 16:04:25

Salut,
Je viens de terminer mon expression écrite qui portait sur cette question: Would you like to start your own dotcom? Justify (200 words)

Voici ce que j´ai répondu:

"To start a dotcom doesn´t me interest really already it´s necessary one to be bitten of Internet, I want to say by that it´s necessary to be a good computer scientist, that is to say knowing there to create a website, of being able to maintain it and being able to updates it any time! Moreover, this new way of creating
companies breaks the real relation between the customer and the salesman. All that takes much time and it´s not sure that goes owing to the fact that with this intention to know and thus so that this company goes, it´s necessary that it made known and this is what is the most difficult to make on Internet.
In addition, the other disadvantage of creating a dotcom is the fact that Internet is
an immaterial good step as would be a store which is to him a tangible property.
Lastly, the other problem relating to Internet is safety! Indeed, on Internet there are many defrauder but there are also hackers!
Thus because of these people there company on Internet can have serious issue or to see a complete closing what is strong regretable.
For this reason, to create a dotcom is for me a means of losting time without having the conviction to have something thereafter considering the incurred danger."

J´aimerais votre avis et si c´est possible que vous me corrigiez!

Merci bien!
Aurevoir :-)))

real_capek
real_capek
Niveau 6
20 mai 2006 à 17:42:56

alors attend ...
je corrige laisse moi lire

real_capek
real_capek
Niveau 6
20 mai 2006 à 17:48:06

doesn´t interest me really (le me etait mal placé)

knowing this ou that

of being able ?? ?????????

to update pas de s

and this is the most diffucult thing to make on internet (pas de what is et il manquait le thing)

to him?? internet n´est pas une personne

because of these people THERE ?? ?????

which is strong regretable *( c mieu)

loosing* time

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