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Freetown
Freetown
Niveau 10
28 mars 2006 à 19:17:18

:salut: j´ai un petit texte a rendre en anglais d´environ 300 mots, et voilà ce que j´ai fait...
Pouvez vous me le corriger :svp:

:merci: a ceux qui perdront un peu de leur temps pour moi :)

Dear All,
It was a veritable surprise when I saw that a lot of my former classmates were logs in this website. I´m so happy to see that you want to know how the others leave and what they become. I hope you remember me but I know I was shy and not very interesting at the begining of our meeting. That´s true that I don´t answer to your letters and it´s not nice for the person with whom I was friend, like Sadie. But you must understand me...I didn´t have a good opinion of me and I prefered forget this part of my life. I think you ask you why I´m writing now...it´s very simple. Yesterday, when I was in my attic, I found a little shoeboxes. I opened it, and tipped out photos of you. A lot of remembers came in my head and I become so fast nostalgic. I think I must speak about my life now...
Do you remember that I´d a lot of dreams, like become a lawyer or chair law refor meetings ? It´s not happened like I hopped... In fact, I became a conveyancing solitor, I dressed day and night in M&S et I´m married to a doctor... Believe me friends, it´s a boring life, not like I had fancy. But don´t believe anything, I love my housband, that´s why we´ve two children together. The person who I remember the most is Sadie... How can we forget you? I was so sad when I see you that you didn´t send a postcard. I miss you. I miss everybody of you, and I regret that we don´t have any contact.
I´m sure that we´ll past a time together...I hope it will soon.
Oh, Sorry but my child is crying, I must leave you, but not for a long moment as I did in the past.

I kiss you and hope an answer !

watza_Kamikaze
watza_Kamikaze
Niveau 10
28 mars 2006 à 19:19:30

Google style.

Freetown
Freetown
Niveau 10
28 mars 2006 à 19:22:43

Ca ne fait pas de bonne traduction...

Au fait,a la place de Believe me, c´est plutôt..." You know...

pc_docteur
pc_docteur
Niveau 10
29 mars 2006 à 05:58:23

Oulala , je vais essayer de corriger :S

Dear All,

It was a veritable surprise when I saw my old classmates on this website. I´m so happy to see that you want to know how the others live and what they became. I hope you remember me but I know I was shy and not very interesting at the begining of our meeting. It’s true, I did not answer to your letters and it´s not nice for my old friends, like Sadie. But you must understand me...I didn´t have a good opinion of me and I prefered to forget this part of my life. I think you ask you why I´m writing now...it´s simple. Yesterday, when I was in my attic, I found a little shoes box. I opened it and tipped out photos of you. A lot of memories came in my head and I became so fast nostalgic. I think I must speak about my life now...
Do you remember? I had a lot of dreams, like to become a lawyer. It did not hapen like I hopped... In fact, I became a ?? ?conveyancing??? ?? ?solitor???, I dressed day and night in M&S andI´m married to a doctor... Believe me friends, it´s a boring life, not like I had fancy. But don´t believe anything, I love my husband, that´s why we´ve two children together. The person who I remember the most is Sadie... How can we forget you? I was so sad when I see that you didn´t send a postcard. I miss you. I miss everybody and I regret that we don´t have any contact.
I´m sure that we´ll past time together...I hope it will be soon.
Oh, Sorry but my child is crying, I must leave you, but not for a long moment as I did in the past.

I kiss you and hope an answer !

J´ai pas pu corriger certains trucs, il y a beaucoup trop de " that " et lache les points de suspensions. T´en a pas besoin...
J´ai surement oublié des choses , mais il est tard :)

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