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It’s an advertissement for a brand of washing powder which name is persil.
This is a full page ad, in colour and comes from “hello” magazine.
This ad concern all the house hold which have a washing machine without considering age sex
or income bracket.
We can say that this ad change the product’s image because with the biodegradable package,
it favorites the protection of the environnement generally it is unusual for a washing powder
As all advert, it had the aim to boost sales, and in this case to sensitive consumers and inform
The public.
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The ad’s illustration is a photo which show us a country landscape with linen suspensed
between two trees.
But we can’t see the product himself or his packaging.
However, the linen suspended between the trees refers to the product.
We can see at the top of the ad, the picture and just inside there’s slogan,
At the bottom there’s the product’s image placed at the middle of a text.
The place devoted to the illustration is very important because the most of people
keep in memory more easily images and colours.
With regard to the place devoted for the text which is the descriptive of the product it is more
little, it is logical because the consumer don’t take the time to read but focuses himself
especially on what is visual.
The slogan which is shorter is written larger that the remainder of the text with the aim to
attract consumers attention.
We can say that the ad is informative and persuasive because explain us that is important
to protect nature.
The slogan “Concentrated Persil supports trees” is a pun.
In fact we can see in the illustration, linen suspended between 2 trees whereas the slogan
refers contrary... that to show us that this washing powder can protects nature and
especially trees
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Its a good ad because it implicate and sensitive consumers for a good cause and try to make
all people aware to this important subjects.
We can say also that the slogan and the illustration are original for this kind of product because
Just with a washing powder this ad reach to attract our attention.
However it’s difficult to tell if this ad is effective or not because some people will be interested and feel
Concerned by this subject whereas much other will not pay attention to it.
