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Anglais,demande de correction

hichem28500
hichem28500
Niveau 10
05 janvier 2006 à 22:16:31

Salut tout le monde,bah voilà,je viens de rédiger un truc en anglais mais j´aimerais qu´une personne puisse me corriger.Merci :)

The film, Bowling for Columbine carried out by Michael Moore and left in 2002 is documentary telling one day with Columbine where unfortunately, two high-school pupils took weapons and killed 12 people and wounded many other people. More than 300 balls were drawn what leaves reflect on their act. That caused much polemic first of all concerning the weapons then then, violence with television and in particular in films or even in the plays vidéos.
Which is my opinion on this documentary? We initially will see what I appreciated and in the second time, which I did not like too much.

This documentary is very interesting because it clearly shows us what it occurred and especially, it recalls the day of the two high-school pupils. Thus, one sees really what they did, with in particular extracts of cameras of monitoring, and especially the phone calls recorded by the police officers and firemen. By hearing the voices in the vocal recordings, that gave me shivers and especially of the sorrow for them. When one sees the images and especially, panic in the college, one is posed really many questions, and one wonders especially if that could arrive in our college or straightforwardly to France. Then when one sees what it occurred, one thinks that American, and especially the American administration are sick and could at least intervene. It is serious what it occurs in this country that one calls world power. I find that it would be necessary that it reacts. The worst, it is that one realizes of the numbers of deaths caused by the United States in various wars and especially with the easy sale of weapon. But unfortunately, it will not be for tomorrow.

Although it is very interesting and very quite carried out, the documentary drift of the subject at the court of time and that returns it wearying. There is especially the impression to re-examine things which one already saw bus with television, one always sees American, i.e. they are is in war (currently in Iraq) or if not, there are always a murder, or a drama. That shows really a very bad image of this power.

This documentary thus succeeded in giving me an opinion on the weapons and especially what it occurs to America and caused many questions.

hichem28500
hichem28500
Niveau 10
05 janvier 2006 à 23:11:51

SVP,c´est pour demain ! Merci

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