Hello tout le
Voilà je voudrais juste avoir des suggestions de votre part pour une petite dissert´ que j´ai à faire en anglais. Voici le sujet :
-Do you think that our dreams can reveal some truths about our personality, or may be premonitory

Voilà j´ai intro-dev-conclu à faire
Si vous avez des idées, des ref de bouquins (de pref anglais) je suis tout ouïe !

Bonne soirée et bonnes vacances à tous !

-Co-

"No" c´est pas bon comme intro-développement-conclusion ?

-> Intro
-> On ne peut rêver que de ce qu´on connait, donc oui, ça dévoile en quelques sorte notre personnalité (connaissances ici).
-> Toutefois, vu l´absurdité des rêves, ça ne dit pas grand chose...
-> Conclusion

Non ?

Merci Glorfindel...Mais c´est pas trop dans l´idée que je souhaiterais développer... Et puis surtout c´est une dissert´ d´anglais, pas de français donc je ne peux pas faire un truc hyper compliqué ^^

D´autres avis ?

Un tit Up ^^ (même si je déteste ça...)

Bon ben voilou après un grand moment de travail, voici le résultat... J´aimerais bien que les débrouillards en anglais aient la foi de le lire jusqu´au bout et de me dire les fautes et ce qui ne va pas ! Merci d´avance à tous les courageux !

We spend hours sleeping: one third of our life. It’s long time but it isn’t lost time. Indeed it’s an intense moment of activity for our brain because we enter another world, an unconscious world: dreams. We will study in what conditions we can say that dreams can reveal some truths about our way of life, our behaviour, our spirit , that is to say our personality, or be premonitory.

Dreams are telltale about us (ourselves). They show our deep wishes and it’s well-known that wishes are reflects of our personality “Tell me your wishes, I’ll tell you who you are”. They correspond to who we are in reality, our REAL “Me”, to what there is inside our mind. Moreover, dreams represent a kind of “second life”: a life where everything is possible, where there are no obstacles, no brakes (for example shyness is a real world’s trouble but it’s inexistent in Dreams World, dream makes it disappear). Otherwise, nightmares are the symbol of our fears, our negative feelings. In these different conditions, we prove that dreams are a sort of mirror which show the reflect of our real personality.
Dreams can also betoken what will happen because they’re reflects of our desires. And, sometimes, we make these desires become true, that’s why we can say that dreams are realized, consequently they’re called premonitory. Besides our dreams often deal with common events, as when you’re at school for students, at work for adults or simply in the street, during a meeting or a discussion. All these things increase the probability for these events to really happen, but the dream rests premonitory. However there’re premonitory dreams whiches (auxquel?) we can’t give any explications. Some people have dreams with accuracy and the dreamt events really happen, it belongs to life’s mysteries. In spite of that, we can put a tinge to this sixth sense of analysis and we’re not obliged to make considerations on it.

Everything we see, everything we do is registered in an extraordinary machine, and it’s neither an index nor a computer but just our BRAIN. And when we have a dream, it’s a sort of medley of what we saw and did in the previous day, everything which was registered in our brain. The dream is a mixing which associate different places, persons, and actions, it often has no sense. Furthermore, if you think about something in particular before sleeping, it will be very probable that your dream will dealt with this idea. So, we can say that dreams are also made with pieces and haven’t necessary sense and signification.

The Dreams World has a main role; it’s before all a means to escape from reality. It’s an opportunity to have another freedom. Indeed, all prisoners have a dream about freedom; it’s their only chance to be outside: they have chains, they’re in cell but they can escape thanks to dreaming. It’s also a means to resolve problems. Indeed, this “unreal world” offers possibilities to think about a lot of things but unconsciously. So we can see that dreams are another means to escape, to think without being premonitory or telltale about personality.

Dreams are powerful, they can reveal some truths about our personality and can also be premonitory but we mustn’t forget that they’re also the World of Imagination. The most important is to stop dreaming our life but living our dreams.

Voilà, je sais c´est LONG ^^

Allez pour la forme ! Un petit effort, pour moi

Oui ,ça n´est pas forcément prémonitoire mais le cerveau peut interpréter ce sui c´est passé et donc prédir ce qui va se passer en quelque sorte....

Merci Player Xbox mais ça y est ma dissert´ est terminée, je l´ai dailleurs postée...Donc j´aimerais savoir si il ya des soucis ds l´écriture...

Tu as bien fait de remonter, au moins je peux lire ça ^^
D´ailleurs je regrette de ne pas avoir été là...
Mais je pense que j´aurai juste des remarques à la c**.

one third of our life : je savais pas que ça se disait comme ça !

It’s long time but it isn’t lost time : j´aime bien, même si j´ignore si c´est correct

there are no obstacles, no brakes : pourquoi pas un singulier ?

can escape thanks to dreaming : thanks to dreams non ?

Voilà, je relève que des trucs bidons, parce qu´en fait je suis pas terrible en anglais et j´apprécie la pensée que tu as développée. Costaud comme texte je trouve, j´espère que tu seras bien notée

Merciiiiiiiiiiiii Viouthay !! C´est zentil, enfin quelqu´un qui s´interesse de près à mon boulot

Ha la la, sinn pr l´autre post, je crois que comme je passe l´oral lundi, en un jour ça va être dur dur de faire un groupe de révisions :-S Bah tant pis ! Je me débrouillerais avec ce que j´ai ! Mais encore merci ;- )

Bonsoir, désolé de remonter ce sujet mais ma question étant rudimentaire et sans grand intérêt, j´ai préféré remonter un topic plutôt que d´en créer un...
Alors la voici, la phrase :
Hope is never dead
Etait-elle conforme gramaticalement ?
Vous l´aurez compris, j´aimerai une phrase qui exprime le fait qu´il y a toujours de l´espoir, mais d´une optique qui souligne que l´espoir ne s´éteint jamais... Je ne sais pas si j´arrive à me faire comprendre, mais j´espère que oui. :-|

J´ai lu, et je trouve ça très réussi !
"whiches (auxquel?)" Je suis pas sûr du tout, mon anglais étant plutôt moyen (je mélange tout ^^´), mais je crois que c´est juste "which".
Sinon j´ai bien aimé la manière dont ton texte est construit, tu accompagnes toujours de petits exemples "all prisoners have a dream about freedom; it’s their only chance to be outside".

Et surtout la dernière phrase lol, il faut arrêter de rêver notre vie et il faut vivre nos rêves.

Idem pour Viouthay, je pense que t´auras une bonne note.

Même en prepa, je ne suis pas capable d´ecrire une aussi belle redac´ en anglais... donc c sur qu´elle aura une bonne note....
Whiches n´existe pas, c which

Merci les gars, c´est trop d´honneur Ben on va dire que j´étais bien emballée par le sujet du coup ^^ Il avait dit "Minimum 250 mots" et du coup j´en ai à peu près 600 ^^
En tout cas merci d´avoir lu ;- )

T´as de la chance de pouvoir écrire autant. Quand mon prof pose une limite, il s´arrête de noter à cette limite. Si on écrit 250 mots et que la limite est de 200, il arrête de lire après le 200ème. C´est très con.
De rien sinon, c´était plaisant à lire.

Ha nous c´est plutôt le contraire, mais c´est parce que c´est en spé anglais aussi... Il a dit "250 mots minimum, mais si vous êtes inspirés c´est tant mieux, no limit !"

La limite tu l´as vraiment explosée là. Mais comme c´est bien écrit du début à la fin, bonne note assurée. Tout le monde te le dit.

We spend hours sleeping: one third of our life. It´s a long but not lost time. Indeed it´s an intense moment of activity for our brain because we enter in another world, an unconscious world: the world dreams! We will study in what conditions we can say that dreams can reveal some truths about our way of life, our behaviour, our spirit , that is to say our personality, or be premonitory.

Dreams are telltale about us.
They show our deep wishes and it´s well-known that wishes are reflects of our personality "Tell me your wishes, I´ll tell you who you are". They correspond to who we really are, our REAL "Me", to what there is inside our mind. Moreover, dreams represent a kind of "second life": a life where everything is possible, where there are no obstacles, no brakes (for example shyness is a real world´s trouble but it´s inexistent in Dreams World, dreams make it disappear). Otherwise, nightmares are the symbol of our fears, our negative feelings. In these different conditions, we prove that dreams are a sort of mirror which show the reflect of our real personality.
Dreams can also betoken what will happen because they´re reflects of our desires. And, sometimes, we make these desires come true, that´s why we can say that dreams are realized, consequently they´re called premonitory. Besides our dreams often deal with common events, as when you´re at school for students, at work for adults or simply in the street, during a meeting or a discussion. All these things increase the probability for these events to really happen, but the dreams remain premonitory. However there´re premonitory dreams to which we can´t give any explications. Some people have accurate dreams and the dreamt events really happen, it belongs to life´s mysteries. In spite of that, we can put a tinge to this sixth sense of analysis and we´re not obliged to make considerations on it.

Everything we see, everything we do is registered in an extraordinary machine, and it´s neither an index nor a computer but just our BRAIN. And when we have a dream, it´s a sort of medley of what we saw and did in the previous day, everything which was registered in our brain. The dream is a mixing which associates different places, persons, and actions, it often has no sense. Furthermore, if you think about something in particular before sleeping, it is be very probable that your dream will deal with this idea. So, we can say that dreams are also made with pieces and haven´t necessary any sense or signification.

The Dreams World has a main role; it´s before all a mean to escape from reality. It´s an opportunity to have another freedom. Indeed, all prisoners have a dream about freedom; it´s their only chance to be outside: they have chains, they´re in cells but they can escape thanks to dreaming. It´s also a mean to resolve problems. Indeed, this "unreal world" offers possibilities to think about a lot of things but unconsciously. So we can see that dreams are another mean to escape, to think without being premonitory or telltale about personality.

Dreams are powerful, they can reveal some truths about our personality and can also be premonitory but we mustn´t forget that they´re also the World of Imagination. The most important is to stop dreaming our life but living our dreams.

J´ai corrigé certaines fautes mais il en reste certainement d´autres vu mon niveau totallement désastreux en anglais.

Merci twk !
Juste une question j´ai un doute si on dit "On entre dans un autre monde" ne se dit pas sans préposition c´est à dire "We enter another world" et pas "IN another world" Vs en pensez quoi ?