bonjour,

Je dois rendre un devoir pour demain en anglais sur moi. Je l´ai fait mais je sais qu´il y a des fautes, si vous pouviez m´aider ça serai sympathique

merci

Hello,

My First name is Cédric, my surname is Lescalier and I am belgan. I am eighteen years old, I was born on 28 January 1987 in Liege in Belgium. I live in Mortier a small village between Liege and Visé. It is a village in thes east of province Liege. Liege is a big cordial city in the East of Belgium.

I study in the section accountancy in Sainte Marie. Sainte Marie is a very famous school, it is located in Liege. I study to be an accountant.

I live with my father in a house with a large garden. I have not sister and broser. My mother is deed when I was teen years old. My father is Fifty-four yaers old, he is pensioner since five years because an industrial accident to the prison of lantin .. During years it worked with the FN. It travelled in the whole world to deliver and install the weapons. I went with him to Paraguay, in Brazil but I had 22 month

In my free time I regulary student english, I play football with my friends ans I am referee of football since four years. I have past of the examinations to the Belgian federation and now I have just assembled category. I aribtre young people of -20 years. The last week I cuts arbitrated the Belgian national team -15 years . I have stoped boxing because it is not a sport for my. I do body bulding since Five yars, I did judo until sixty years old. I have been champion of wallonie.

At the weekends I go out with my friends, we go to the cinema or to karting. I have a abonnement in Standard of Liege. It is my team favourite in the world.

broser ==> brother

belgian non?

Is dead when i was ten

"I have not sister and broser" -> I don´t have any sister or brother OU I have no sister and brother

"because an industrial accident to the prison of lantin " Because of an industrial accident in (je suppose??) the lantin´s jail

"During years it worked" For years he worked...

"In my free time I regulary student english" study

"I have past of the examinations to the Belgian federation " I have succeeded at the examinations to the Belgian federation
ou I have succeeded in passing the exam...

"because it is not a sport for my" for me

"It is my team favourite in the world" It´s my favourite team in the world

Voila
Sinon "The last week I cuts arbitrated the Belgian national team -15 years " Je vois pas ce que tu veux dire, et puis pas de S au cut normalemnt à la premier pers du sg

Pour les phrases du type "Sainte Marie is a very famous school, it is located in Liege." c´est mieux de mettre "Sainte Marie is a very famous school which is located in Liege."

merci à tous, c´est gentil