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hichem28500
hichem28500
Niveau 10
13 octobre 2005 à 22:38:11

Salut tout le monde,alors voilà,ce serait cool si une personne pouvait me corriger,merci.

The parents should intervene in the decisions of the young people when those starts to exceed the limits i.e. when they start to want to leave abroad to find work or to live there. When the young people want to marry at an age very young, between 15 and 20 years, the parents should be opposed because the consequences would be likely to be serious. If the young people think of moving or of stopping the studies and of living the life, it is necessary that the parents interpose because one should not in no case to release these proper children. Today, the young people are accustomed to only making their decisions and does not divide enough any more of confidence with their parents and one would need only all that ceases.

Merci

trunk445566
trunk445566
Niveau 10
13 octobre 2005 à 22:53:29

jvais te l´écrire avec de bons sens de phrases:

the parents should intervene when their kids starts to exceed the limits i.e. , when they start to thinking about finding work or to live to their homes. when the teens want to wed to a young age, (between 15 and 20 years old) the parents should oppose them because the consequences would be incredibly serious. if the teens think to move or unhook the studies or living their life, its necessary for the parents to interpose, because in no case they should release these proper childs. today the teens accustomed to making their proper decisions and they not divide enough confidence with their parents and would only need all that cease.

trunk445566
trunk445566
Niveau 10
13 octobre 2005 à 23:00:40

qui on remercit maintenant?

:sarcastic:

hichem28500
hichem28500
Niveau 10
14 octobre 2005 à 06:17:07

:merci: Trunk445566 C´est trés sympas de ta part :oui:

Vulk1
Vulk1
Niveau 10
14 octobre 2005 à 08:41:22

Trunk>> Ya des fautes, je le refais vite fait.

The parents should intervene when their kids start to exceed the limits i.e. , when they start to think about finding work or to live in their own places. when the teens want to wed to a young age, (between 15 and 20 years old) the parents should oppose them because the consequences would be really serious. if the teens think about moving or unhooknig the studies or living their life, its necessary for the parents to interpose, because in no case they should release these proper children. Nowadays, the teens are accustomed to make their own decisions and they do not divide enough confidence with their parents and would only need all that cease.

trunk445566
trunk445566
Niveau 10
14 octobre 2005 à 21:31:11

ouais Vulk jai pas trop comprit sa dernière phrase donc je me suis pas trop forcé sur elle lol

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