J´ai un résumé de ma journée à faire en Anglais, donc si vous pouviez m´aider a corriger les fautes ou à améliorer, ça serait super sympa de votre part

Donc Voilà :
The night was long and a little people slept. A 7.00 am we were on the boat. 15min later, we left to England ! We visited it during the crossing whiwh lasted 1 hour. When we arrived on the English ground, we took again a bus to go Cambridge and to visit King´s College´s Chapel. For the tradition, we took a picture of the group, then, we went to eat. The good weather wasn´t here ! After, we went to Easingworld. At 6.00 pm we left with our respectives families. The Adventure Began ! I made cobirth with my partner, Kelly;her sister, Gillian; and her mother in the car. I learnt the tall sister wasn´t at home because shr worked but she left me a Post-It. They had me visited the house where I was going to life during 12 days. I unpacked my bag. Before to eat, they suggested me playind football. I accepted ! To have dinner, we had an English pizza ! I finished the evening with the TV, then, I went me slept at 10.30 pm.

Merci Beaucoup à ceux qui m´aideront !! !

Please

SVP !

c koi le whiwh?

Je suis pas terrible en anglais mais je crois que i went me slept at 10...... ca ne se dit pas, je dirais plustot then, i went to slept at..... mais j´en suis pas sur

c est bourré de fautes, mais désole j ai pas le temps