Salut ,
en anglais j´ai a faire une premiere lettre pour un cores imaginaire ,est ce que vous pourriez me corrigez et si vous avez d´autre idée de ce que je pourrais mettre parcque apparament c´es trop court
Merci beaucoup par avance pour votre aide

Hi,

My name is Mickael . I’m sixteen years old , my date of bird is twice February . I have brown hair and blue eyes . I have a little brother , he is thirteen .
I have a nice dog too .
My mom works in a wear’s shop and my dad in a factory.
What’s your type of music ? Me I prefere rap .Do you know G-unit or 50cent?It’s Us group .
This year i’am in 10 th grade in school , i don’t go to school at Saturday .
Do you like play computer in your free time ? Because i like that .
In this summer I went going to italia for fifteen days. Mu family have a house in italia . And you where did you go in summer ?
I would like to mmet you

With best wishes . . .

Mickaël

Ps : Can you give me photo with your next letter please .

I am sixteen suffit amplement.
Birthdate ; second of February / February second.
Tu peux aussi écrire "I am brown-haired and blue-eyed".
I prefer.
Free time?Je dirais "spare time".
"I went going"?Ca n´a aucun sens.Italy et pas Italia(c´est Italie en italien)."For fifteen days",je dirais "for a couple of weeks".
Meet.

Pour le PS,j´écrirais : Can you include your photo in your letter,please?

Merci beaucoup mec pour ton aide c´es super simpa je prend note :d merci merci

Hi,

My name is Mickael . I’m sixteen years old , my date of bird is second February . I have brown hair and blue eyes . I have a little brother , he is thirteen .
I have a nice dog too .
My mom works in a wear’s shop and my dad in a factory.
What’s your type of music ?I prefere rap .Do you know G-unit or 50cent?It’s Us group .
This year i’am in 10 th grade in school , i don’t go to school at Saturday .
Do you like play computer in your spare time ? Because i like that .
In this summer I went to italiy for two weeks. My family have a house in italia . And you where did you go in summer ?
I would like to mmet you

With best wishes . . .

Mickaël

Ps : Can you include your photo in your next letter,please?.

oups :
voila

Hi,

My name is Mickael . I’m sixteen years old , my date of bird is second February . I have brown hair and blue eyes . I have a little brother , he is thirteen .
I have a nice dog too .
My mom works in a wear’s shop and my dad in a factory.
What’s your type of music ?I prefere rap .Do you know G-unit or 50cent?It’s Us group .
This year i’am in 10 th grade in school , i don’t go to school at Saturday .
Do you like play computer in your spare time ? Because i like that .
In this summer I went to italy for two weeks. My family have a house in italiy . And you where did you go in summer ?
I would like to meet you

With best wishes . . .

Mickaël

Ps : Can you include your photo in your next letter,please?.

Je vois encore des fautes dans ton texte.

Hi,

My name is Mickael . I’m sixteen years old , my date of bird is second February . I have brown hair and blue eyes . I have a little brother , he is thirteen .
I have a nice dog too he have eight . Have you got pet ?
My mom works in a wear’s shop and my dad in a factory.
What’s your type of music? I prefere rap. Do you know G-unit or 50cent?It’s Us group . I have computer in my bedroom.
This year i’am in 10 th grade in school , i don’t go to school at Saturday .
Do you like play computer in your spare time? Because i like that .
In this summer I went to italy for two weeks.My family have a house in italiy . And you where did you go in summer?
I like ferrari’s car , i have friends who he have one . It’s very beautiful .
I would like to meet you .

With best wishes . . .

Mickaël

Ps : Can you include your photo in your next letter,please?

"Date of birTH", pas "birD"
"I have a dog, who´s eight" (je pense que tu veux parler de son age)
"Do you like playING"
"I have friends who have one"

Sinon a part ca, rien de très grave