pouvez vous regarder si il n´ya pas quelques fautes ( surtout de temps!!) dans ce petit texte??

merci!!

Hello! My name is Axelle. I took part in Olympics Games in 2008, in Bedginig. This is my story.
I went to the sport school in 2002. The training had very difficult, and very tiring. In 2006, I had my black belt, at 14 years old. After, in 2006; I went to Rouen , for continues at the INSEP. I haven´t been with my familie. I have slept the week en the dormitory of the school and i have gone to my home the weekend. The trainings had most diffocult than the sport school of Caen. I have done many competition: France Championship, Europe Championship... I have been one time first of France and third of Europe.
Since, in 2007, i spent 6 months to japon for improve my judo and learnt other fight sport:takwendo, kungfu...
when i returne in france, i have done a competition for the olympics games qualification... and i have finished second of my category! I have qualified for the olympics games to bedjing!!
during the olympics games, i have won 6 fight, but after, i have losen.. but i have been fifth!! and i´m only 17 years old!
I have met many cellebrity: david douillet, celine lebrun...
it´s a very good experience for me! Now, i prepare the europe championship in 2010, and maybe the olympics games in 2012..

franchement le niv d anglais des francais me font peur....

desole j avais pas vu que t as 13 ans, c est plutot pas mal pour un eleve de 13 ans, meme bien, mais desole je n ai pas le temps de corriger

ok ok mais si qqn vois des grosses fautes, dite le moi!

The training had very difficult
The training was very difficult

familie
family

les i ( je) meme en milieu de phrase se mettent en majuscule.

ok ok merci

I have met many cellebrity
I met a lot of famous persons

I have qualified for the olympics games to bedjing!!
I was etc...

pk on met pas present perfect?

for continues for continuing
for improve for improving ( for + ING je crois)
learnt learning
returne return ou come back
to japon in japon
i have finished I finished
cellebrity celebrities
Since Next ( since c depuis)

tu peux mettre present perfect mais t´as oublié un mot: I have BEEN etc..

To continue
To improve

to japon in japon in japan

I have done many competition

--> I have taken part in a lot of competition.

I have done many competition
ou mieux encore :
--> I took part in a lot of competitions.
Pourquoi utiliser un present perfect ici?

Now, i prepare the europe championship in 2010

ne serait-ce pas
Now, i am preparing the europe championship in 2010

Major_T oui tu as raison c mieux

c´est peut être european
et c´est I pas i

ne serait-ce pas
Now, i am preparing the europe championship in 2010

En effet.

lool merci, meme qi il y a des trucs que j´pige pas tjrs^^