Salut à tous.
Voilà, j´avais un rédaction d´anglais à faire, son sujet étant le téléphone portable ( en avez vous un, pourquoi, comment sera votre future téléphone, etc...), mais n´ayant pas un très bon niveau dans cette matière j´en appelle à votre aide pour corriger mes éventuelles erreurs, et de me dire où je pourrais pourquoi pas rajouter des mots de liaison...
Merci d´avance.

No, I have not mobile phone, because I have not utility. I think, I will have a mobile phone in the future, because it can be useful and interesting when I play tennis, when I have got a problem or when I am all alone in the nature or at a friend place.
Next, when I will have a portable phone telephone, I would like he had the wap, a good caméra, the web to visit and watch my favourite url , to consult my e-mail and to discuss with my friends on Msn Messenger, Skype or Icq Messenger. I hope he manage to the Java to play a little, he had the infrared, and why not Bluetooth or WiFi to exchange fact with other device or with my personnal computer. It was to super if he can read videos and films or musicals clips, and mp3 music.
Finally, I would like use my mobile phone to speak with my friends, and to send Short Messages Service.

No, I haven´t got mobile phone, because I don´t need to use this. I think, I will have a mobile phone in the future, because it can be useful and interesting when I play tennis, when I have got a problem or when I am all alone in the nature or at a friend place.
Next, when I will have a portable phone telephone, I would like it to had the wap, a good caméra, the web to visit and watch my favourite url , to consult my e-mail and to discuss with my friends on Msn Messenger, Skype or Icq Messenger. I hope he manage to the Java to play a little, he had the infrared, and why not Bluetooth or WiFi to exchange fact with other device or with my personnal computer. It was too fabulous if it can read/play videos and films or musicals clips, and mp3 music.
Finally, I would like use my mobile phone to speak with my friends, and to send Short Messages Service.

Un grand merci à toi [inconnue]...
Bonne journée...